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Written: April 26, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Awakening, my soul climbs to pure bliss, The vertex wobble, swayed by the sun's kiss. A flame within my spirit burning bright, For me, the scene looks same as windy sight. Majestic peak reaches toward the sky, Whispering life's elixir with descry. My heart has never seen such a sweet light, I found solace with shelter in my plight. my soul is boosted by the sunlit lake, serene in silver; in my eyes, thrills wake. A serene gold, waking thrills in my gaze, Leaves are retained by trees, and limbs arise. Bewitched by its gathered emerald cloud, My spirit soars to peaceful heaven shroud.

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Date: 4/26/2024 10:33:00 PM
Beauty, joy and serenity emanate from your lovely poem. The sunlit lake is presented in all its loveliness. Reading this beautiful poem, my soul too has climbed to pure bliss. You are so much at ease with the use of spontaneous rhymes, and I feel poetry is in your life blood. Have a great Sunday dear friend.
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Date: 4/26/2024 4:42:00 PM
Much enjoyed the vibrant voice of your poem, my friend. Beauty and serenity of nature resonate throughout.
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Date: 4/26/2024 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful ! I enjoyed listening to it . A Fave :)
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Date: 4/26/2024 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful ! I enjoyed listening to it . A Fave :)
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Date: 4/26/2024 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful ! I enjoyed listening to it . A Fave :)
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Date: 4/26/2024 3:49:00 PM
Very nicely done Sotto, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 4/26/2024 3:31:00 PM
What a joyful and uplifting Sonnet, dear Sotto! Your gift of creating meaningful and cohesive rhymes is ever apparent in the lines of your Sonnet. Your poem was captivating and enchanting. I especially liked 'my soul is boosted by the sunlit lake, serene in silver.' Those words reminded me of my blissful childhood days sitting in my father's boat on the lake :-) Have a wonderful evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/26/2024 1:37:00 PM
this is beautiful Sotto rounded off by the last two lines bewitched indeed kudos my friend hugs Shadow
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Date: 4/26/2024 12:31:00 PM
Majestic peak reaches toward the sky, Whispering life's elixir with descry…love the sunlit lake, serenity in silver and gold…the joy of it all!
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