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In the beginning before you, there was only the desolate darkness. Just like in the Bible, two people were created for each other. The creation of a beautiful paradise just for you and I. To spend our precious time together in lovely bliss forever high. The only differences are that it ain't called Eden, I'm not Adam, you're not Eve. And a place where evil cannot enter to taint your pure and jovial soul. So worry not about the evil snake because I'm there to fend it off. Your safety and sanity are my utmost priority for eternity. God gave me full responsibility to ensure this world does not fall into calamity. I shall share all the burden that you carry so that you can be happy. To ensure that you and I can sustain our dream to be happy together. Because only when you're happy then can that dream truly become our future. For this is my holy duty as your soldier of pain. Notes This is a slightly modified verse from a rap I wrote (under the same title of this poem/verse) dedicated to my clinically depressed ex-girlfriend whom I loved dearly to cheer her up but ultimately made her feel worse for some reason and she broke up with me. The verse is about me trying my absolute best to protect my ex from all the pain or sadness that she may be susceptible to due to her depression as making her happy was one of my promises to her, which I failed to honor... I'm not here for sympathy but I'm posting it here so that at least someone else can read it and hopefully enjoy it. :-) Oh and it's not meant to be religious either since both of us are not, I just used the Bible as an inspiration for this verse.
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