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Hide and Seek

There was a girl talking in rhyme She thought she could perform in mime Never knew how to read Neither play hide and seek She was caught penning an eye rhyme.

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/29/2019 12:58:00 PM

After some searching I managed to find an earlier poem of yours which escaped the net, Besma :) A lovely charming, creative Limerick with a cute end line! ~ Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/1/2019 4:11:00 AM

I hold very dear your genuine generosity and heartfelt support, Paul.. I venerate and cherish your honouring visits and valuable feedbacks.. thank you so much. Always a great delight to see you on my page. Deepest regards and Blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/24/2018 8:47:00 AM

Hi Besma, Pleased to meet you, I have read a few of your poems and you are truly a talented poet. However I do love my limmericks and this one is really special. Great write, Best regards, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/25/2018 9:32:00 AM

The honour and pleasure are mine Jennifer! Oh! Thank you so much for your generous, sweet and praising feedback! I'm deeply humbled and grateful to you for the precious time you granted me to read and appreciate my humble poetry! Looking forward to reading your beauties. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/12/2018 4:54:00 AM

A very clever Limerick, Besma, truly enjoyed my dear friend....Penning an eye rhyme....Love that....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/12/2018 3:08:00 PM

Good to see you dear Maria! I'm so glad today having you on my page.. always my great delight to read your supportive and encouraging feedbacks! Thank you so much dear friend. My love and hugs. Stay always blessed.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/30/2018 3:51:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely limerick dear Besma. Liked lot. Thanks for sharing it.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/30/2018 12:33:00 PM

I'm grateful to you Ravi for your generous and encouraging feedback. Deeply humbled and honoured. Best regards. Be blessed always.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/29/2018 11:24:00 AM

Your work is always a pleasure to read Besma, thanks for sharing it with us...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/30/2018 12:27:00 PM

I'm very honoured and delighted you find pleasure in my reads Charlie. Thank you so much. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/28/2018 6:25:00 AM

Charming dearest, Besma! Much liked!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/28/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Demetrios, your visits are always a great delight and a fount of Light.. you always honour my humble work.. my deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/27/2018 9:14:00 AM

Lovely limerick dear Besma...we'll always find you no matter where you hide lol...because your poetry shines thru my poetic sister...love & seek...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 1:38:00 PM

A cheering feedback that puts smiles inside the heart! Thank you so much Winged Warrior for your unique and beautiful words! Best regards. Be blessed always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2018 7:07:00 AM

A talented girl she was...born with a gift to adore and create artistic expressions..lovely imagination, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 1:52:00 PM

I highly value and appreciate your generous and encouraging words of a soul wrapped in beauty and a heart dipped into poetry.. thank you so much dear Vijay! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/27/2018 12:19:00 AM

And... was this little girl called Besma?! Cute limerick, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 4:38:00 AM

Dear Line, how kind of you to shine my morn with your cheering feedback! Always honoured and pleased by your visits and feedbacks.. Love and hugs. Stay blessed always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/26/2018 10:17:00 PM

Ooh that would be tough but, a great Limerick. Cleverly done.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/27/2018 4:36:00 AM

Lovely and generous is your feedback M.L. Kiser! My honour and pleasure! Thank you so much. Regards. Be blessed always.