Fatso

They said how she ate was absurd; A "Fatso", they called her she heard, And ever since then That poor, baby wren Just pecked at her food like a bird. 8.31.18 Contest: Any Animal or Creature Limerick

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 6:47:00 AM

Nice!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/18/2018 10:12:00 PM

Excellent limerick- packed at her food like a bird- nice fun

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/18/2018 5:49:00 PM

Hello Jesse, I love your poem it is so cute. I smiled as I red. have a nice evening my friend.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/18/2018 7:06:00 PM

Thank you. Hope you have a nice evening yourself.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2018 10:18:00 AM

I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/18/2018 12:32:00 PM

Thank you for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 3:50:00 PM

this was SO cute. like a bird. That was quite clever!!! FAVE

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 12:13:00 AM

Kids can be so mean! Good limerick, Jesse.

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 11:36:00 AM

This is great, Jesse. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 5:02:00 PM

Thank you. This was a fun contest. Thank you for the placement.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2018 9:09:00 PM

Three thumbs up, Jesse! (I'm all thumbs). :) gw

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/31/2018 4:33:00 PM

Perfect photo to go with your limerick! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/31/2018 7:08:00 PM

A happy find when I Googled "Fat Wren". Aloha.

Chris Green

Date: 8/31/2018 9:25:00 AM

That was cute Jesse. Nicely done.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/31/2018 7:07:00 PM

Thank you.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/31/2018 8:34:00 AM

Awesome!!! This bird nerd's voting for you ;) In fact, I have to fave it. Good luck in the contest Jesse! xomo

Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/31/2018 8:56:00 AM

Many thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.