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Electic Comb

Gonna take my comb outa my pocket, May as well kiss it goodby and hock it. This is much less trying, although close to frying. Just stick my tongue in the light socket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/17/2011 9:06:00 PM
That light socket might comb your hair for you! Fun and a chuckle, I love it.
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:20:00 PM
Good one..That would be a great modern style..Got a chuckle..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:20:00 AM
Male pattern, so it is called, Therefore my friend I won't call you bald, Keep the comb handy, because someday, You might just sport a new Toupee,....lol Love it my friend..and yes I am Backkkkk... I will be in touch...Love and God Bless...The Original Taz! BTW Brick may stop by....
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Date: 8/23/2011 9:08:00 PM
congratulations on your win Robert! not an easy rhyme scheme, but you did it impressively and w/a great flow too. it matches the picture to a t :)
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:32:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:47:00 AM
oh, and I see from comments below that congats are in order too!! Yay for you!!! (I hope I can finally get time to see some winners' lists!!)
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:46:00 AM
hahaha. Great ending!!
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Robert
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:12:00 AM
Great win. Good for you. Tony
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Date: 8/22/2011 1:09:00 AM
tou and your funny bone, robert..lol.. . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:41:00 AM
Had to laugh at this one my friend. Reminds me of the picture that prompted the Wolf Man. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win with your humorous poem. Joyce
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:55:00 PM
Congrats and lol!! Thanks for your comments on my work!
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:59:00 PM
hahaha. Fun one. and a big Congrats to you.
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:17:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your first place win with this fantastically funny poem luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:11:00 PM
hey Bob congrats and should this one come with a health and safety warning, ha ha David
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Date: 8/21/2011 3:49:00 PM
Hey Bob great job, Haaa! Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/21/2011 2:16:00 PM
Electrifying win, Robert! Great limerick indeed! The guy looked like Albert Einstein in a hurricane to me! Gwendolen
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Date: 8/21/2011 2:02:00 PM
nooooOOOOO! don't DO it! hehe, ya sparked the mom in me. Great write, Robert A. Congrats!
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