Dogs Fruit

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Fruits of our labour is in this tree This one we all use to poop and pee They ripen with time Grow and taste devine Poo-pee plums, humans scrump for their tea.

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Simon Hamill

Date: 5/18/2024 1:29:00 AM

hi emilia, I love your funny limericks, they always make me smile. thank you. simon :-)

Emilia James
Date: 5/22/2024 1:21:00 PM

Hi Simon and thank you. Hope you have been keeping well. Emilia : )

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/14/2024 7:19:00 AM

Your "Dogs Fruit" is a cute Limerick write. A killer last line. Think it is true??? Hahaha!!! Glad to see you writing. Have a great/blessed day.....................

Emilia James
Date: 5/15/2024 8:17:00 AM

All I will say is, it is still a fluid and a manure of sorts which is good for any plant or tree that absorbs and feeds from it. More fruity tastier plums maybe? lol. Emilia : )

Deb M

Date: 5/3/2024 3:47:00 PM

Hi Emilia…..lovely to see you my friend. Cute witty poem!! Hope alls well! Debx

Emilia James
Date: 5/9/2024 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Deb and good to see you too. Hope you have been keeping well. Emilia : )