ZIP

perform life’s feat? Zip line scares! hanging like sheet… need a drink Indecisiveness not option pushed to brink flying over cedar Parrots on repeat guide’s my cheerleader

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/6/2024 7:58:00 PM

Kim, this is a really neat poem. Looks like a new form. Did you make this one up? My sister, an elder like me, still does zip -lining. OMGosh. Carol Louise

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/5/2024 6:16:00 PM

New & interesting poem!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, Abdullah!

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2024 9:09:00 AM

Interesting form, dear Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, our dear William (Hilo Poet) has a contest with his poetry form. You should check it out! Blessings ~ Kim

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/5/2024 7:16:00 AM

It sounds like fun. I like the free, wild, energetic style of your poem. I'll put zip line on my wish list.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 10:33:00 AM

I did it three times. It was never on my wish list but my husband wanted to do it. On two of them I broke out in tears. My first time was in Antigua, a brand new zip line. On my last one I just had to have courage to leap from the topmost point then zipped over the beach. Once I stepped off I loved it, got lower and lower…no worries. Hope you try ~ Kim <3

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/5/2024 5:54:00 AM

Kim, I feel like I am on a wire while reading this. Very realistic feeling and sentiments. How many situations do we find ourselves in that trigger these feelings?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2024 10:36:00 AM

Truly! I guess the remembrance that we survived could help us when the proverbial bottom drops out.