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A poem for you In hope my feelings could come through A poem where sky would not be blue But filled with you While knowing I am grey to you Wishing I could grow a lotus for no matter how tiny bit of a seed it is While you have put on emotions of budhha Making your poem stiffed with cold From the winter that has it's origin from you Is this poem bound for desolation a failed voyage for me that is adrift "By the raging storm of my feelings"

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Date: 5/13/2024 8:53:00 PM
stunning painting of words from a stunning soul
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Date: 5/7/2024 8:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (Please check ABC as poetry form.)
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Date: 5/5/2024 1:09:00 PM
This is my first poem, so if you could give some feedback, it will be much appreciated
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