Your Love

you softly whisper my name, candlelight glows in your eyes, promises dance in your smile; your love enfolds me

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 1:36:00 PM

Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win, its lovely hon, well done. As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 4:20:00 PM

Deb~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Spicy" contest Deb sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/23/2011 6:38:00 AM

a sweet one, a real hallmark moment congrad's on this fine win. Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2011 7:20:00 PM

Your win! Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:31:00 PM

simply beautiful. And I love it still. Congratulations!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2011 9:45:00 AM

precious write! CHEERS for the win, dear deb! :) hugggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 9:37:00 AM

Deb congratulations on your great win in MF's contest ;-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:16:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win my friend..enjoy with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 6:10:00 AM

Congrats to you my dear!!! luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 6:07:00 AM

Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Deb Radke

Date: 1/9/2011 5:37:00 PM

Thank you, Mr. Pettit!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/9/2011 4:58:00 PM

Deb, watch your syllable count in the second and third lines. You have eight syllables in both (one too many). Just replace each "within" with "in" and you are under the wire.

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/9/2011 3:42:00 PM

just lovely Deb..very romantic with "promise dances,candlelight glows"...love,Deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2011 3:17:00 PM

Romantic as can be!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2011 2:37:00 PM

an inviting love with such beauty:), enjoyed your write,..p.d.