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Writing a Poem

A single stroke dispatches emptiness, in one ambitious line gives backbone to my limp attention. Rigid fingers tighten on the brush. The bristles slash again and incorruptible reality is neatly tailored to my artifice. Leaning on my arm, I glance behind me at the letters inching down the page. There's no return, no second chance. The brush no longer mediates between intention and accomplishment. It races on ahead of me, guided by the incidental pattern of its progress. Independent of endeavor, indifferent to what I am or what I hoped to be, it brushes my design aside and draws its own conclusions.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/22/2017 5:11:00 PM
That is a different version of writing a poem. I like it Alan. Welcome to poetry Soup. Haved a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/13/2017 9:33:00 AM
Excellent! The process is so different to the end product. Sometimes I wonder where the words come from.
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:51:00 AM
The confusion here I think is - Is it your own poem ? - or one written by someone else - either way you have chosen to share with us all - whatever it is a lovely idyllic poem of greater understanding with the information given - As I was lost between an artist painting and a "Poet" writing - I hope it is your own poem because once understood it is a "Master" piece in its own right - Thank you for the share - Indiana x x x
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Alan Ireland
Date: 8/6/2017 7:58:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. Yes, the poem is my work. When you say, "I was lost between an artist painting and a 'poet' writing," you hit the nail on the head. Japanese or Chinese calligraphy, which is written from the top of the page to the bottom, is both art and literature. The same is true of Arabic calligraphy, in which the letters can be used to construct the image of a bird or a flower.
Date: 4/5/2017 10:11:00 PM
This poem was written in Japan (where poems are traditionally written with a brush). It was first published in Poet (India), and revised in 2017.
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