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Wicked Tactics

Fever pitch dreaming finding waves; in amble forgiveness touching God's grace, but never realizing the truth dragging through life, always bleeding from the begging, empty hands; grasp for quantity desperately dull, seeking lies instead of lasting peace, worldly delusion; blocking my point of view breaking rightful freedoms, testing hearts for their grief miserably misunderstood, lacking basic knowledge to give little relief, I'm fond of the memories running beneath my skin, taking on wicked tactics untill the bitter end.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2023 3:25:00 AM

Very emotive, especially the last four lines

Tom Woody

Date: 9/21/2023 8:55:00 AM

Well, this seems to describe a person with some real issues. Seeking truth but preferring lies. A life of delusion, confusion. At least that's my interpretation. Your style is unique

Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2023 12:45:00 PM

Sometimes. It's all about what one practices

Candice Yates
Date: 9/21/2023 10:49:00 AM

It's about the sinfulness of man. People choose lies over the truth every day. However, the ones who acknowledge they are seeking darkness and dishonesty seem to be living more of a truth than those who pretend they are living honestly.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/27/2022 6:19:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas and prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.