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hello below are three separate entries may this day find you well thank you "what we see" I wonder how you see me how I look in your eyes are expectations met what do you see you wonder how I see you how you look in my eyes are expectations met what do I see we see each other we look with open eyes with expectations met love is what we see SkyWatcher 04-22-24 "stare once more" nothing touches me more when you stare at me what I see I wish those moments to never end moonlight or sunrise kisses could not be finer for the passion continues to grow stronger holding hands with words of love reach my heart such reflections of tenderness are our light all this and more ignite dawn and darkness love found its way to cherish forevermore each glance from you I desire and hold touch my world and stare once more SkyWatcher written 04-25-18 "with much to say" since that one fine day with everything to taste I see you I hear you you touch me I feel evermore since that one fine day with everything real you see me you hear me I touch you you feel equally since that one fine day with love we bring we both have much to say SkyWatcher 04-27-24

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Date: 5/7/2024 4:32:00 PM
Well well, you're quite the romantic aren't you? "Some people want to fill the world with silly love songs (poems). What wrong with that?" From a Paul McCartney song
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:57:00 AM
Hello Tom. You have me smiling with your commentary. Truly. Thank you. I know of that song and its a great song. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. (smile)
Date: 5/2/2024 1:14:00 PM
Very beautiful Lisa! So glad to see you back….Debx
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Deb. Hi. I come and go unfortunately. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. (smile)
Date: 5/2/2024 6:17:00 AM
Dear Lisa, your three entries are beautiful reflections on the depth of connection and love between two individuals. Each poem beautifully captures moments of intimacy and vulnerability, evoking a sense of warmth and tenderness. I loved how your words are filled with authenticity and emotions of love's profound impact on our lives. These are heartfelt pieces. - Blessings, Daniel
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:55:00 AM
Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Thank you very much. I do not take your generosity for granted. Truly. I appreciate your wonderful intake and commentary. Your review means much. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. Blessings back to you. Thank you for that. (smile)
Date: 4/30/2024 5:17:00 PM
I felt love almost 'oozing' from your lines and words. The last three lines reminded me of hubby and I. When we met, we talked for hours...we both had so much to say...like we'd found our matching soul in the universe. Well done...hope you're well..thinking of you, hugs, Sara
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/31/2024 7:53:00 AM
Hello Miss Sara. You are beautiful. Thank you so much. Truly. I hope all is well with you and Bill too. Time keeps passing by fast. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page. (smile)

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