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5/5/2024 for A New Funny or Bawdy Limerick Set Poetry Contest, sponsored by Tania Kitchen

He vacationed with his girlfriend in France, Where, on the beach, he averted his glance. Ignoring all the heat, He kept cool and discreet, While he carefully adjusted his pants. 'Twas praiseworthy how he tried not to look. He cautiously put his nose in a book. Big and itty-bitty, What he missed, a pity, 'Til his girlfriend said, "please help me unhook."

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Date: 5/7/2024 10:58:00 AM
Well, David, I'd say that this certainly satisfies Tania's contest qualifications...funny and/or bawdy. BOL!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/7/2024 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Jim!
Date: 5/7/2024 10:23:00 AM
LOL! Quite a story within a limerick!
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:50:00 AM
Lol, Nicely done..
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David Crandall
Date: 5/7/2024 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 5/6/2024 3:37:00 PM
awesome job--best wishes with the contest, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 5/6/2024 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 5/6/2024 11:15:00 AM
fun one david, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/5/2024 11:35:00 PM
Hilarious! Enjoyed reading!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/6/2024 9:17:00 AM
haha - thanks Karen!

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