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Gloomy dismal, and forlorn... that's how this day was borne in a Greyling sallow place where death doth reign without a face. In a boneyard of decaying flesh, one fresh abyss was dug to the depth of six feet before the night was still. With shovel in his hand, the digger gave a shrug and left the land of the dead. The cathedral stood tall but grimly foreboding on the edge of a haunted wood. Built on hallowed ground, where the ancient ones lie decaying in their graves. Knaves and preachers, the righteous and the sinners, followers and teachers... all buried side by side covered now with hoar frost. Lives, once lost never see the light of another morn. They are mourned and tossed into a hole like rubbish and trash, or as ashes interred in an urn after a burn. It's all the same to the reaper. Harsh winds have taken aim at maudlin tree limbs that seem to hang their heads after watching their leaves flayed by Autumn's sinister breeze. Seasonal zephyrs have no pity. They always have their way with the rape of deciduous trees. Winter's chill thrives in a world so still. It's created a haunting silence, one nearly serene in this scene. There's no place to rest in between life and death in such a stygian world. No escape from somber despair. There's only an ominous pall if anything is to be found there at all... it will surely be expounded in the quiet space of such a dreary place.

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Date: 5/5/2024 5:07:00 AM
Lin, hauntingly captivating, lives lost and forgotten and left in places that are both serene and somber, wonderfully penned!
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Date: 5/5/2024 5:36:00 AM
Tania, thanks so much seeing what I saw in this photo offered for an AP contest.
Date: 5/4/2024 10:31:00 PM
I love dark and gothic style poems, for a second I thought the second verse was my living room! But no diggers arrived and I still have a pulse! :)
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Date: 5/5/2024 12:47:00 AM
I don’t see you in a dark and gothic environment… always at a cafe, sharing a meal and conversation with friends. Oh, the world problems you could solve. That sallow place is not for you, but thanks for liking it.
Date: 5/4/2024 4:35:00 PM
How captivating, Lin! As I read your words, I could see the dreary place with its haunting silence. I was struck with your word choices (ominous pall, stygian world, season zephyrs, etc.) I especially liked this verse for it created feelings of gloom: Lives, once lost never see the light of another morn. They are mourned and tossed into a hole like rubbish and trash, or as ashes interred in an urn after a burn. It's all the same to the reaper. Well done! Faving. hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/5/2024 12:43:00 AM
To captivate another poet is probably one of the finest compliments I could receive. Thank you, Sara. Now, I know I’ve done justice to that painting. We shall see if AP poets agree.
Date: 5/4/2024 11:57:00 AM
Dearest Lin, wow, such depths of despair with haunting eloquence. Each line just aches with the weight of sorrow of a desolate world where darkness reigns supreme. Your words really pierce the soul, confronting the harsh realities of life and death with raw honesty. May your poetic journey continue to shed light in the shadows, Daniel.
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Date: 5/4/2024 12:59:00 PM
I was a titch worried where my mind was wandering in this one... written with that picture in mind for a contest in All Poetry. It's ongoing about a space between black and white... my Greyling place. Thanks ever so much for finding something to like about this one, Daniel.

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