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The Warm Friend

He would visit the wharf of the pond very often Peace and joy writ large on his lips and eyes He would whistle a tune to call the shoal of fish From inside the water as well as from his heart The clouds got intimate with the flirting sunlight Like a comfortable poem the shoals appeared In three or four groups they would come up to He would look like gleefully chatting with them In wonder would look on the tales in the reeds Shadows of tall palms played hide and seek He would feed them as if they were his children Sometimes he just talked on with no motivation Their movement would raise ripples in the pond Inside would pulsate an impressionist painting The euphoria in water would erase and redraw Clouds in loud colours would go down the water And would watch in wonder the blue rendezvous He shed the foliage of his unquenched passion Into the mother water that with a purple comfort Would convert them in the lotus of his heartbeat Country folks remarked he must have been a fish In his previous birth in a very deep pool or lake No, others would say, an angel accompanied him In his surreal bridge of love for the water and soil The mahogany at the roadside would smile a little He would write so well his poem inside the water Where human and piscine tongues would meet Time halted a while in the warm breasts of geese As the sessions came to an end he would depart Sweet and salty sweat-drops would wet his shirt _______________________________________ 14 March 2017

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Date: 3/15/2017 10:30:00 AM
The euphoria in water would erase and redraw....Wow Sir! Its beautiful. I'm a college student who writes poems as a hobby. Hats off to you sir. People like you make me realise the miles I have to go. You are true inspiration Sir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/16/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thank you for your delight at my words of pleasure ... Here in the poetry soup there are far superior poets ... Read, assimilate and write with your own flowers ... as you love poem, you will definitely prosper, Parvathy ...
Date: 3/14/2017 2:40:00 PM
Beautiful description of the shores of the sea! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 11:53:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/14/2017 7:28:00 AM
Shadows of tall palms wonderfully and interestingly played hide and seek.Surreal bridge of love for the water and soil mesmerized mind with this magnificent expression. An interesting imagery is drawn in this poem here. ...7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 11:54:00 PM
Thank you very much ..
Date: 3/14/2017 6:56:00 AM
Inside would pulsate an impressionist painting. The euphoria in water would erase and redraw. Love especially those two lines! And the final stanza! Lovely, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/14/2017 6:33:00 AM
If each time you disappear you come up with such a masterpiece then I shouldn't complain when you are away dear, Probir! A seven my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 7:18:00 AM
Time and health stand in the way ... Many a dark cloud from the Bay of Bengal! ... Thank you for your nice comments ...
Date: 3/14/2017 6:25:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Probir! I particularly love that line 'Time halted a while in the warm breasts of geese'. Beautiful.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 7:19:00 AM
Thank you ...

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