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The Poems I Never Wrote

I dare you to give up can't you feel the air? as I fly by your ego you ate my despair, It's caught between your teeth your skin laced in grief, relatable suffering; gripping your mindless thoughts don't you remember peace? Forgetful sins; committed with greed dressed up in satin sheets, look at your ruby red cheeks; we could chase the seas I count the days; to remember the chaos, the chaos; you brought to me don't remove it now, or you'll choke on the memories.

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Date: 10/19/2023 1:30:00 PM
Ooooh, I felt this one. Visceral write! xomo
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:28:00 PM
A powerfully gripping piece, Candice! Love the image *As I fly by your ego you ate my despair it's caught between your teeth * amazing! Best wishes , Mikki
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Date: 9/21/2023 5:55:00 PM
Dear Candice, the wonderful cadence of your verse belies the turmoil embedded in your gripping imagery. I especially enjoyed "your skin laced in grief" and "dressed up in satin sheets" and "we could chase the seas" - stunning.. and each a vivid springboard for expressing a snarl of emotion. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/21/2023 8:51:00 AM
Nice first entry Candice. Relationship angst is always fertile ground for a poet
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Date: 10/21/2022 10:39:00 PM
outstanding. I think personally this poem needs more exposure. keep it up. You have a brilliant head over there. I love it
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Candice Yates
Date: 10/23/2022 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 10/15/2022 8:09:00 PM
Brilliant! So happy to have come across this write
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Candice Yates
Date: 10/23/2022 12:13:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/6/2022 1:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... vividly expressed in your poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.
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Date: 10/5/2022 1:53:00 PM
I can feel the angst. The end seems to indicate that without the chaos, though your out of it, there would be no good memories at all.
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