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The Marvelous Platypus

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The platypus excels at evolution And displays a super cool solution For making his way amidst the muck,  He don't run aground.  He don't get stuck. Of this, the platypus would never dream As a self-respecting monotreme. Indeed, a platypus of station Will employ electrolocation.

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Date: 5/5/2024 5:33:00 AM
loved the rhyme scheme and fluidity of your words that made for a delightful read. I liked "self-respecting monotreme." Faving this one...enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 5/5/2024 8:04:00 AM
Thanks and glad you enjoyed. That platypus is pretty cute, huh?

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