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The Fall of Macbeth

March forth Macduff, your sword to smite. The head of a king for your requite! Ten years he has reigned with innocence feigned. Greed and slaughter his ultimate blight!

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 10/19/2017 8:52:00 AM

Hi Thvia, my son played the lead role for mcBeth and 32 high schools came ro qatch it and being performed in a famous cave here. Quite extraordinary. Thus I love your write.

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/24/2017 5:17:00 PM

I am not that taken by this Shakespearean play but your poem is a different matter. Short and to the point. no pun intended.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2013 2:45:00 PM

Good work about some history with a little humor mixed..It seems that he got his just desserts..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were greatly appreciated..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 8/2/2011 7:25:00 PM

he got his just deserts too right, crost the styx at sweet daylight, i'm innocent he claimed... love your verse here, Don

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 8/2/2011 9:27:00 AM

Good penning, good Limerick. So far only read two, but yet enjoyable. Thanks for your kind comments.

James Fraser

Date: 4/2/2011 5:24:00 AM

You hve captured the Bard's dude perfectly Thvia. Have a lovely weekend....:)smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 10:06:00 PM

Macbeth captured in a little limerick. cool!

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/24/2010 6:08:00 PM

excellent my friend

John Freeman

Date: 11/24/2010 11:42:00 AM

Thvia, this is a gem of a Limerick, way to go. Agape, Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/13/2010 1:55:00 PM

great movie!!! jhl

David Smalling

Date: 11/11/2010 11:27:00 AM

Hello, Thvia, how are you ... I am searching for your voice in this. It is your voice that keeps me raptured when I spend time with your poems. Please do not mute it, my heart would not serve the silence.

Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/9/2010 2:29:00 PM

Genius! Not just the writing. I think you are a genius, This was PERFECT! Blew me away!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2010 6:43:00 PM

Great limerick, Thvia. (How do you pronounce your name?) Thank you for your kind comment and my 3rd place in your fun contest. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2010 6:33:00 PM

Hi Thvia..hope u are having lots of fun.. and u will be back soon my friend.. enjoy... good luck with your contest too..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2010 6:26:00 AM

Perfect piece Thvia my friend.. good luck if for the contest.. lovely rhyme sequence to enhance your lines luv... enjoy a Happy Halloween weekend .. cozy and warm.. me too..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/29/2010 4:09:00 PM

What a nice summing up of the play Macbeth in such nicely worded write, Thvia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2010 12:51:00 PM

Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Tvia. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/29/2010 10:57:00 AM

Super limerick, Thvia! I love Shakespeare and this is really on target in the message. Nice work. Best to you, Diane