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"That Place" In that place where you were abandoned, that place, they never thought, you’d come back from, in that place where it is believed nothing grows in the long night’s tortured darkness, deep down, well, a spark lit something quite quiet, far removed and forgotten, and now it grows rapidly, coiling inside, snaking sharp-edged like mother’s tongue root it transmits something alive, something like love, its veins drawing back in again a loquacious life, the moisture from tears, a necessary nourishment from the lake of disbelief, betrayal, trauma and grief, a bless'ed blooming in disguise, the succulent luscious life those all important tears gift; what spreads from the darkness and its erratic reach, calling into it all embers of ethereal light? Now ultra-lit, some revolutionary reincarnation arrives back from the dead, it soaks the unseen light up greedily, for it is extraordinarily hungry, to taste if but just a drop of sunshine in the glory of forever and ever, this is what it dreams when it sleeps; after the amen, hibernation, it grows and it spreads robust, rigorous (not necessarily), yet, like a beautiful irregular disease, there is no turning back once the light kisses it and it has a taste for life, it goes looking for some kinder heaven; yes, this is accurate, I do believe - from nothing something blooms from nothing, the arrival, awake, life lessons learned, what is poor, and what is rich, what is true and untrue Candide Diderot. '24

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Date: 5/8/2024 2:13:00 AM
"There is no honest way to explain it, because the only people who really know where it is, are the ones who have gone over."
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Date: 5/8/2024 2:14:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/blue_shotgun_lantana_1494714
Date: 5/4/2024 11:24:00 PM
Nothing Blooms.
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Candide Diderot
Date: 5/4/2024 11:24:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qYMajYjMXBE

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