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Sweet Spring Rain

In the gentle morning glow, Spring rain sighs on petals, Sweetness in each drop, Blossoms quiver with delight, Nature's tender kiss unfolds.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/4/2024 4:30:00 PM

Exquisite Tank, Don! You beautifully captured the spring rain...I agree. Sweetness in each drop. I especially liked "blossoms quiver with delight." What a great image. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Don Iannone
Date: 5/4/2024 6:31:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the comments on the poem. Have a wonderful evening. Don.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/4/2024 12:21:00 PM

Hello Don, I think you have eloquently captured the delicate beauty of a spring rain shower with eloquence and grace. The imagery of rain sighing on petals and blossoms quivering with delight evokes a sense of tranquility and renewal. It's nature's gentle touch and the subtle magic that unfolds with each drop. Your words are like a soothing melody, ushering in the sweetness of spring. Blessings, Daniel.

Don Iannone
Date: 5/4/2024 6:32:00 PM

Hi Daniel, thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. Based on real experience. Sometimes those provide the best poems. Don