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Stop, Look, Listen, Smile

I can’t bear that rock in my shoe, As I sit, I glance up mesmerized by the sunset’s view. Seven deep in a grocery line, The wonderful innocent stare of a baby and mine align. Two minutes ‘til the microwave dings. I’m lifted on wings while the voice above nostalgically sings. Dropping my change all over the ground, It’s a wonder these tiny ants can amass such a mound. Traffic slowed to a halted gridlock, Listen to the honks leading that swaying vee of a flock. Keys locked inside my car, The horizon is so clear today, I can see so far. Coffee dripped upon my shirt, I’ll go in and change giving my darling a romantic flirt. My dog drops a load on their lawn, To their magnificent flower garden my eyes are drawn, Drive thru with limited crew, I don’t think I’ve ever seen that particular sunrise hue. If only I could stop on my own accord, I would readily see creation’s beauty gifted from my Lord.

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Date: 10/1/2017 8:52:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Micael - nicely done! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/1/2017 8:56:00 PM
Thank you Gregory...I definitely appreciate the blessings.
Date: 9/28/2017 9:34:00 AM
Michael, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful write!
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Michael Vacek
Date: 9/28/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, I was honored to even be considered.
Date: 9/18/2017 2:38:00 PM
This is fine flowing rhyme- much akin to fine flowing wine! Do not stop-- write more, this your readers shall implore. A ray of color for hearts left blue, sweet rhymes dancing two by two.. A fav.. thanks..
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Michael Vacek
Date: 9/28/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Robert. I absolutely love writing. I really enjoy sharing.
Date: 9/18/2017 1:36:00 PM
Aha! I thought I smelled bubblegum! Awesome :) I live my life that way. This is a delightful write and I am delighted to have a part in it. Bless! xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/18/2017 1:54:00 PM
Oooh! Gotta find that poem! :)
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Michael Vacek
Date: 9/18/2017 1:45:00 PM
I've paraphrased a line in David Whyte's poem and shared it with many:. "Attention is the discipline of familiarity..." You certainly do smell bubble gum.
Date: 9/18/2017 10:57:00 AM
Michael, love the flow to your poem, a wonderful write of your steps of the day. Eve ~`*
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Michael Vacek
Date: 9/18/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Eve. Maureen's "A Century to Immortality" sparked the musing of this poem. Too often we are stopped for a moment out of our control and given a moment to recognize beauty...what if we stopped more often out of choice?

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