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Stains of Chlorophyll

Creak, creak…snap, whoosh, thud! Helpless sound of suffering echoes through the forest penetrating the inflicted silence of fear and diminishes. Twigs, branches and trunks crashing upon one another; together they stood as trees, now fallen on the ground. Chlorophyll stained chainsaws and axes busy chopping off. Moist eyes of a robin over shattered nest with broken eggs. Hive burning into smoke as bees gyrate with singed wings. Squirrels scurry away, their crushed offspring left behind. Soothing greenery - a natural shade, shelter and air filter all uprooted by terrifying red bulldozers with a final touch. Nature's ancient glory will soon turn into decayed reliquiae. Duty calls for development hired by ruthless avarice that wants to rule over this planet on concrete thrones. So here it goes again…snap, whoosh and thud!
Date: 10/30/2017 Note: For the contest (From My Diary) by Broken Wings. *Placed Second*

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Date: 11/8/2017 7:22:00 PM
Congratulations Afzul: If only there was a way to stop the carnage. At least your poem can raise awareness.
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Date: 11/8/2017 10:17:00 PM
I hope so. Thank you for the visit and comments, Suzanne.
Date: 11/8/2017 6:16:00 PM
Lovely nature scene, Afzal. Congrats on your win.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/8/2017 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 11/8/2017 2:21:00 PM
This outstanding realization of clear cutting of our forests stings like a piercing arrow into the heart Afzal! An amazing piece that deserves its high placement! Congratulations! : )
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/8/2017 10:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie.
Date: 11/8/2017 12:00:00 PM
Afzal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful look at nature, ever so sad though ! Can almost feel the pain.
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Date: 11/8/2017 10:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for the placement. I'm glad you liked it, B.W.
Date: 11/8/2017 7:50:00 AM
A worthy winner, congrats. It is sad what is happening to our forests.
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Date: 11/8/2017 10:14:00 PM
Thanks for the visit & comments, Richard.
Date: 11/8/2017 12:51:00 AM
Stark and brutal, a sharp commentary on our mismanagement of nature in the name of greed. Congrats on your win, Afzal. Regards, Viv
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/8/2017 4:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Viv.
Date: 11/3/2017 10:09:00 PM
You have woven an incredible scene into the decimation of nature by the greed of avaricious developers Afzal. I hope more people like you take note...Maria
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/5/2017 11:04:00 PM
Thanks for the insightful comments, Maria.
Date: 10/30/2017 7:03:00 AM
This is an amazing poem Afzal, you have some great lines and you create vivid imagery...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/30/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, S.O.

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