So Naive

Who am l kidding It means nothing at all Just another pile of bullsh*t Into l fall Am l so gullible Thinking the best To be disappointed, disillusioned My heart put to the test Toughen this soft heart Stay away ,withdraw Stop being naive Nail shut my hearts door Should l suspect the worst Protect myself Have no expectations Put my heart away on a shelf

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/9/2023 8:20:00 PM

Nope. Please don't shelve that heart of yours, Deb. Never ever worth it...

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/8/2023 1:39:00 AM

Your beautiful, precious heart on a shelf would be so sad Deb. I know how you feel though, a soft heart is often bruised, and we do need to protect that vital organ from breaking. I hope you're well. Hugs to you sweet lady <3

Lin Lane

Date: 10/7/2023 2:20:00 AM

Be aware and cautious, Deb, but a heart as kind as yours doesn’t need to toughen up. You’re fine just the way you are.