Skin of Terror
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As the pre-dawn sky bleeds a sickly purple, the endless asphalt transforms into a twisted reflection of his own fear. This gripping monologue delves into the chilling depths of anxiety, where every bump in the road becomes a jolt of dread, and the very air thickens into a suffocating shroud. Prepare to be consumed by the raw terror of a panic attack.
I also posted a short story about this poem today, with a different feel and ending but the same scenario. The title is "Asphalt Asylum: Skin of Terror."
- Blessings,
Daniel Henry Rodgers
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Skin of Terror
- Daniel Henry Rodgers
(Lights slowly rise on Michael. His face, etched with worry lines, is illuminated by the faint glow of the dashboard as he hunches over the steering wheel, knuckles white against the worn leather. He hears a low mournful whine like a lonely dog howling as the moon fills the background.)
MICHAEL (Voice raspy, a melody frayed by fear):
Ten thousand sunrises bled into this tarred vein, each one a brand searing memories deeper. Not landmarks but trucks long gone, whispers of rust and diesel stain the asphalt with a deathly sheen, bleeding into the bruised belly of dawn.
The air, thick with the ghosts of yesterday's breakdowns, hangs heavy like a damp shroud for this highway is a desolate graveyard of dreams turned to dust, where the rusted carcasses of engines cough their final breaths, and bald tires surrender to the relentless sands of time.
(The whine intensifies, a banshee's wail echoing the storm brewing inside him.)
The engine's thrum, once a comforting lullaby sung by a thousand miles, now a death knell tolling for hope long dead, and yet two years back, on this very stretch, a spectral hand of dread reached through the windshield, sucked the life from the world, shrunk it to the confines of this steel cage.
Gasping for air, a drum solo on my skeletal frame, I felt myself dying, a fly trapped in the amber of terror.
(The whine escalates, a physical presence clawing at his sanity.)
The memory, a serpent with eyes like polished obsidian, coils around my heart, squeezing the life out of each ragged breath, static hisses from the radio, a chorus of doubt whispering insidious thoughts in my ear, and yes every bump on the road, a jolt through my soul, amplifying the dread gnawing at my insides.
The air thickens, a suffocating shroud stealing the oxygen from my lungs as the highway stretches on endlessly, an endless funhouse mirror distorting reality.
Headlights, once beacons in the night, now appear as malevolent eyes, burning with an unnatural hunger. A monstrous truck rumbles past, its roar of madness conducted by the orchestra of fear in my head.
(Michael fights for breath, his voice a mere tremor.)
Can't… Breathe… Lungs constrict, like a punctured balloon, deflating in slow motion my sweat slicks my palms, the steering wheel a slimy serpent I desperately cling to.
"Not again!" I rasp, a stranger's voice echoing in the cavern of my skull.
Vision swims, the yellow stripes blurring into a hypnotic dance, at the edge of perception as a pale, hollow reflection stares back from the rearview mirror, a stranger wearing the mask of his own face.
(A low, rhythmic hum fills the air, growing louder. It's not the whine anymore, but a deeper, more insidious sound.)
This buzzing presence is a manifestation of the terror that festers within. Is it real? Or is the highway itself a living entity, twisting the fabric of reality to reflect the grotesque nightmare of my own psyche?
(The hum fades abruptly. Silence descends, heavy and pregnant with unspoken dread. The silence stretches on, broken only by the rhythmic tick-tock of the dashboard clock, a crow lands with a startling caw on the windshield, its black eyes gleaming for a moment before it takes flight. Michael flinches, momentarily jolted out of his terror.)
Michael (whispering to himself): Just the wind... gotta be just the wind messing with me.
(He wipes a bead of sweat from his brow, the metallic tang sharp in his mouth as he glances at the rearview mirror again, but the pale reflection is gone, replaced by his own weary face.)
Twenty minutes ago, the world was unraveling at the seams, threatening to swallow him whole, and now, the silence is deafening, a different kind of terror altogether.
But beneath the veil of relief, a chilling truth remains etched in his bones.
The terror, a predator in the shadows of his mind, waits for its next opportunity.
Waiting for the highway to morph back into a twisted reflection of his own horror.
(The low hum begins again, with a subtle tremor at first, then growing steadily louder, and this time, it seems to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once. Michael's grip tightens on the wheel, his knuckles white. His breaths come in shallow rasps.)
>b>Michael: No... please, no... not again.
(He slams his fist on the steering wheel in a desperate attempt to ward off the encroaching fear. The headlights in the distance seem to pulse with a malevolent light. The yellow line on the road blurs into a monstrous grin. The truck that passed earlier reappears in the rearview mirror, its chrome skull on the hood gleaming menacingly.)
Michael (shouting): This endless road! This never-ending fear! I just can't...
(Lights slowly fade to black as the hum reaches a crescendo, merging with Michael's terrified scream.)
Copyright © Daniel Henry Rodgers | Year Posted 2024
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