Seashell Days

lazing by the shore whispers flee from ebbing tides winds howl in silence

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Date: 12/29/2019 11:23:00 AM

A lovely first offering to the soup. A belated welcome. I hope you are enjoying your time here.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 12/29/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. I've written a few others but it's been a while. Now that the holidays are coming to an end, I hope to get back in my groove.

Date: 6/4/2019 6:39:00 PM

Love the contrast here. I just had to come see your first post. Welcome to Soup.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 6/4/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea.

Date: 5/20/2019 1:19:00 AM

"whispers flee from ebbing tides" makes the sea sound mysteriously mystical.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2019 7:18:00 AM

Thank you for reading my work too, my friend. I appreciate that.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 5/20/2019 7:55:00 AM

Thank you for your comment, Caren. This is my first poem on Poetry Soup and I am enjoying reading your work.