Say You Will

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say you will always slow dance with me beneath the moon as we watch the stars; perchance we'll spot one... shoot across the sky! say you will open wide the door to your heart so I'd walk right in and live... now and forever! (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/6/2021 7:26:00 PM

Glad to find this charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/6/2021 7:54:00 PM

And I'm so glad this poem is as special to you as it is to me, Line:-) Blessings to you, my friend!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/27/2020 6:25:00 PM

This is a wonderful write Edward, I so enjoy this lovely form you created, simple yet challenging, so actually.. not so simple after all!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/28/2020 6:53:00 AM

Thank you very very much for your wonderful comments, John:-) Most appreciated.

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/11/2020 8:24:00 PM

A great memorable piece here, Edward, well done for my FAVES, my friend, Aloha! William

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/12/2020 6:50:00 AM

Thank you so very much, William:-) I appreciate the FAV. Aloha, my friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/8/2020 12:57:00 PM

Hello Edward, oh this is lovely. A lovely romance poem. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2020 7:58:00 AM

Hello Edward, I will and you s well. Bye for now.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/8/2020 2:49:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene:-) Enjoy your day as well, my friend!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/8/2020 12:42:00 PM

WOW! This poem charmingly adorns your invented form, Edward. I am saving this in my FAVES.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/8/2020 2:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the FAV, my friend!