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Reverie for the Sun and Moon

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ sun bright, big rising, shimmering, setting day, warmth, night, cold glowing, changing, dimming barren, lonely moon

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/7/2024 5:41:00 PM

Oh, love the picture, and the poem did it justice

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/8/2024 5:27:00 AM

thanks...I rather liked the pic as well...have a great day, Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/2/2024 11:04:00 AM

Sara, a perfect set of oppositions for a diamonte! Well done! If this is for a contest, best wishes! Blessings of sunlight for your day and moonbeams for your dreams!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:48:00 PM

thank you so much, Sam, for your enthusiastic comments. Grateful for your support and for wishing me a sunny day. It was..celebrated our 41st anniversary. Wishing you a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2024 7:37:00 AM

Great work on this. The moods come through!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2024 8:34:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:46:00 PM

thank you, Kim...appreciate your mindful comments...also like your new pic. have a lovely evening, hugs, Sara

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/2/2024 4:04:00 AM

The juxtaposition of these two heavenly bodies is perfectly captured in your Diamante Sara! I love the balance and the thoughts it brings to mind!! Happy Thursday xxoo

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:25:00 AM

aww, thank you Mike. I appreciate your observation and the positive thoughts my poem brought to your mind. Wishing you a pleasant day, Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 5/2/2024 3:29:00 AM

Dear Sara poetess, This is quite brilliant in it's striking contrasts. Well done ..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:24:00 AM

thank you, Nancy. I appreciate your observation and your feedback. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 5/1/2024 11:12:00 PM

Such a beautiful diamente! Love how youv written about the sun and moon dear sara. Clever and creative, i find diamentes fun to do, they make us think and put words together to deliver whats required. And you did that so well. Pleasure always reading your work. Iv missed reading you. Been so busy but whenever i visit your page im never disappointed. Sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:24:00 AM

thanks for your positive and mindful comments. I've missed you, your comments, and your creative spirit here on PS. I understand, though. Life happens and you do what you can. Know you're supported. I appreciate your visit & take care, hugs, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2024 8:44:00 PM

This is a poem of striking contrasts. I like the strong adverbs that describes the sun and the moon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:22:00 AM

thanks for visiting and sharing your observations about my poem. Grateful for your support. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara