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All morning the river wore a thick fog along its length, until a great looming shape emerged, tall, gliding almost soundlessly towards me, becoming the bow of a ship parting the fog, escorted by two tug boats churning the water, the deep throb of their diesel engines sending a shudder through the air. The sheer wall of the ships hull slowly passed, tapering to a stern and trailing a wheeling throng of seagulls in its wake, their bright wings catching a column of sunlight that had suddenly broken through the fog, freeing what was there hidden in the unseen to come forth into the known.

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Date: 5/4/2024 4:37:00 PM
your poem allowed me to feel the dampness of the foggy mist and the unknowns...so symbolic! But the last lines were your best: hidden in the unseen to come forth into the known. How often that happens to us in life...the hidden comes forth into the known. Such powerful inferences. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 2:28:00 AM
Thankyou Sara....very much appreciate your comments...always full of insight and depth. They mean a lot....
Date: 5/4/2024 12:20:00 PM
Dear Paul, your depiction of the river shrouded in fog, only to reveal a majestic ship cutting through the mist, is a profound revelation of the unseen becoming known. The imagery of the tug boats and the seagulls adds to the sense of wonder and awe. I loved how your words invite us to embrace moments of revelation with open hearts and minds. Blessings, Daniel.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 2:26:00 AM
Again, exquisite exploration my friend...you really have a talent. Thankyou for spending so much of yr time knee deep in this poem. Valued...
Date: 5/4/2024 6:43:00 AM
Your poems usually leave me wanting more, but this one more than ever before. What did you see, or you leaving that to your reader's imaginations?
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 2:23:00 AM
Thanks Lin. Forgive the delay in reply....I'll rely on your imagination to furnish a few possibilities...got to preserve some mystery my dear Lin. Take care...
Date: 5/4/2024 5:54:00 AM
Love it Paul….the last line is a beauty…tying the poem together! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 2:19:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind words Deb, thankyou...

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