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Passionately

This poem is written for the Gender Bender contest, sponsored by Richard Lamoureux! **Passionately** Why do you not hold me, passionately? The little things that show you care. Like running your fingers through my hair! You used to rub my back, passionately! the little things like foot massages, manicures and pedicures. I always felt secure we used to make love, passionately! The little things like kissing my stomach and inner thighs, Dancing naked until sunrise! We used to make out in public, passionately! The little things like homemade meals for two, date night once a month. Love all night in the buff! You used to speak to me, passionately! The little things are gone now we fight more than we get along. I've tried to stay strong but my heart has moved on! Name held until contest over!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/30/2014 10:43:00 PM
Nice Jared... Congratulations on your win.... Verlena
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Date: 6/18/2014 11:29:00 PM
Jared, Congratulations:)~ Enjoyed, reading every awesome poem on Richard's L, Gender Bender winning list. ... XoX.... LINDA
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Date: 6/18/2014 8:38:00 PM
I guess sometimes this happens over time in a relationship. we get to comfortable with one another...congrats Tim
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Date: 6/18/2014 6:27:00 PM
Hey well done! you got the role down great and scored an awesome win. I enjoyed this very much :)
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Date: 6/18/2014 12:59:00 PM
Hi Jared, Congratulations on your sweet win, awesome Gender Bender win...SKAT
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Date: 6/18/2014 11:06:00 AM
simply fabulous well done Jared, Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 6/18/2014 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Gender Bender,
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Date: 6/18/2014 9:39:00 AM
A late but strong entry, congratulations.
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:01:00 PM
Hey, Jared, you did a GREAT job with this one. I like how you think (like a woman would)!!! Hope this one scores high!!
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:19:00 PM
For some reason this makes me sad, but it's a very nice write and I see it's for a contest so best of luck ...Noelle
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Date: 5/18/2014 6:51:00 AM
Lovely read this afternoon, good to read your poetry again ;) tc all the best for the contest Jared
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Jared Pickett
Date: 5/18/2014 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Wilma, good to see you as well. I will be by to visit in a while!!:JP)
Date: 5/18/2014 3:48:00 AM
Hi Jared, you have me wondering... wishing you luck...Linda
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Jared Pickett
Date: 5/18/2014 12:38:00 PM
Wondering what?
Date: 5/18/2014 12:49:00 AM
Very sensual , Jared
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Jared Pickett
Date: 5/18/2014 12:40:00 PM
Appreciate it my friend!!!:JP)
Date: 5/18/2014 12:45:00 AM
I liked.
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