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Oblivious

She is oblivious to the fact That she can make my mind Tedious Which makes me furious But imagining her smiling upon Makes my heart troubled as ocean On a stromy night

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Date: 5/5/2024 1:08:00 PM
This is my first poem, so if you could give some feedback, it will be much appreciated
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