Nothing

She smells like nothing To the whole world Tattered dress ripped leggings Pigtails on the sad girl No one sees her face She slinks around All hopes and dreams Shattered no fortunes found Onlookers judge her dirty clothes Unrecognizable the sweet Child of nobody and no one Raised in the street She smells like nothing To the whole world

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/19/2024 7:12:00 AM

dang, there'z sump'n wrong with me dear poet...i still pictured(you know how us artists' do)'side mine think; hern purty 'yearz from now'(in the frayed diaphanous frock)in one uv my writes hear on the Soup')...her rusty tattered, "who cares, edvard loves me" coy smirk ,) loved it!

Kelli White
Date: 5/27/2024 10:43:00 AM

Thank you very much James.

Silent One

Date: 5/16/2024 11:13:00 AM

A sad portrayal of a character here... no one should have to feel this way..

Kelli White
Date: 5/16/2024 11:19:00 AM

Thank you SO, runaways and abandoned children. I think this is how they feel