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None Can Ever Survive On Its Own and Be

Shall I my very ego embrace And only me see on Earth face! ***** Could I my heart keep safe and sound And all the fears of the mind unbound? Would I cling to a balmy ivory tower And just feed on the honey of one flower? Could I detach my Self from any bond And to dilemmas be able not to respond? Would my soul blossom into creative art As oblivious the mind and confined the heart? ***** Shall I my very ego embrace And only me see on Earth face! ***** How would a flower a bee suffice To spark the music of a bird of paradise How would a rose leak nectar in delight If it couldn’t withstand a harsh wind bite How would I in the shades of a bright sun bloom If I couldn’t bond with beauty and its perfume Would my quill have enough ink to spill Have I to leave my cocoon and my veins refill? ***** Shall I my very ego embrace And only me see on Earth face! ***** Much to learn from the world of a bee None can ever survive on its own and be The Rose! to a butterfly a source of energy Admired for its fragrance and beauty Art! The softest spot in my heart Huge what it can to me impart Embrace the now and let your soul rhyme Translate your rapture in words so sublime Let’s live “wild and wise”, learn and discover Those are true words and feelings of a Nature Lover.

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Valsa George

Date: 12/4/2021 6:01:00 AM

As human beings we are never islands. We live in harmony with Nature and our fellow beings. One who focuses only on himself with his narcissistic attachment to himself will become so egoistic. One whose heart is filled with love of man, love of the creator and love of the wonderful world around lives a fulfilling life. In you all these qualities are blended so well making you so desirable. Each poem of yours unveils a little more of your worth. Blessed to enjoy your friendship, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/6/2021 12:37:00 AM

Blessed as you are dear friend and poetess with the eloquence of your profound thoughts and the artistry of your sensitive and inspiring poetry! Blessed as I am with the gift of bonding with such a beautiful soul who inspires whenever you set your fire! You are of depth and warmth, Valsa! Thank you so much for honouring my humble words and elevating my soul.. My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/29/2021 9:53:00 AM

Wonderful poem on the communitarian aspect of life as well as philanthropic values.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/4/2021 6:33:00 AM

So glad to read your profound response to my humble words and thoughts.. Thank you so much, Christuraj! My deepest regards and blessings.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/21/2021 5:37:00 AM

Very Beautiful!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/21/2021 7:36:00 AM

So sweet of you to visit my page, read and appreciate my humble work! Thank you so much, Christuraj! My deepest regards and blessings.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/19/2021 10:56:00 AM

Reason leads to emotion and arrive at a logical conclusion. Man was not born to be alone. A deep poem that makes the reader think hard. For there are egoists around. It's their doom. How well you conclude your beautiful poem. Worth waiting for.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/20/2021 2:34:00 AM

I count myself blessed to have such kind, profound, genuine and rewarding response to my humble poetry.. I highly value every single word you generously spilled.. deeply humbled and grateful to you Victor.. thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/19/2021 10:05:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this poem of introspection, Besma. You speak so eloquently about interdependencies of nature and humans. Much depth to your dialogue questing to embrace beauty of life and nature.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/20/2021 2:09:00 AM

Much beauty and generosity you impart to my soul and humble poetry! So honoured always to have your feedbacks of great worth and your great support.. thank you so much, dear Vijay! Looking forward to reading your amazing poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/19/2021 9:48:00 AM

Wow, this is an incredible work of art, Sister Besma, what a great imagery, what a wonderful story, you hit the jackpot with this superb poem, every verse is a standalone poem, every word is written with a vibrating soul, your exceptional great wording value should illuminate and be heard, my heartfelt regards to you, and I hope to see even more of your delightful poetry

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/20/2021 2:01:00 AM

And what an awesome praise! I can't thank you enough, Lasaad for such an elating response! I am deeply humbled and glad you enjoyed my work! Thank you once again for taking so precious a time to kindly read and wonderfully comment! My deepest regards and blessings.