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Nine Month Night

Nine month night - light broke free like dawn. In babe’s face, impassioned pinking. From romance of wishful thinking - Too many threads to count, forgone. Potent, when God, she called upon.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/1/2024 4:16:00 PM

although short, your poem was captivating, dear Kim. I especially liked "too many threads to count, forgone...potent when God she called upon." Wisdom in those words that spoke to me. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2024 7:32:00 AM

Finding the nuances of a poetic form. The rhymes on certain lines, the subject matter, etc.. Thanj you, dear Sara, always! Hugs ~ Kim

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/1/2024 6:35:00 AM

The mystery of life, the mystery of love, the mystery of creation -- what keeps me coming back to God, enthralled with God, is His endearing, never ending mystery. One experiences first-hand through Christ.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2024 9:13:00 AM

Thanks, Joe!