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My Pretty Red Bird

my pretty red bird - wears a white coat of snow. My fun and very best friend Dan, and I built a huge snowman. on the snowman sits my bird, singing with the jaybird. the sun is out our snowman gets a tan. Will he melt away, I love my red bird - snowman My two winter friends.

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 6/1/2024 8:51:00 PM

After reading your poem, I thought to myself, wouldn't this make a sweet little board book for a young child. It was so darling.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2024 9:33:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you like my fun "Red Bird" write and found it to be so darling. I never thought about this one being a book for a child. Guess you are right. Have a fun/blessed day writing away....................

Len Gasun

Date: 12/29/2023 8:52:00 PM

I'm so delighted to read another awesome poem of yours my dear poet friend. Red birds are rare (never in my life I've seen one, only on pictures) and I'm sure they're so pretty in reality also their songs. I can imagine the red bird's beauty and its lovely music while perching on your other friend, the snowman. I can imagine the joy your best friends bring through your stellar write. Thanks a lot for sharing. So enjoyed. Lots of blessings to you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2024 9:30:00 AM

Thank You for your note. I am so very sorry I missed this one from you. I just found it. Glad you like my fun "Red Bird" write. I love red birds/I do not have any where I now live. One comes in a pretty red/one in a red brown. One is male/one is female. Look up on the web to learn more. I could see the red birds/the snowman together. Hugs... Have a fun/blessed day writing away....................

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2023 6:15:00 PM

A cute poem... dear Paula. Hope the snow man you built with great effort will not melt away and your red bird can perch on the snow man for long. May your two winter friends have a happy co existence for long.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 8:41:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you like my fun "Red Bird" write. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I love my wonderful friends, my red birds/the snowman. I had many red birds to feed at my last home. Here I have none. That makes me sad. I loved them all. Have a fun day with a blessed 2024 writing away....................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/24/2023 9:13:00 AM

So lovely, Paula. Not only do you paint a serene winter picture, but there is a wonderful sense of friendship between you, your red bird and the snowman! Blessings! Merry Christmas!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 8:37:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Red Bird" write. Yes, there is a wonderful friendship between me/my red bird/the snowman. Before my last move, I had many red birds to feed. Now I have none here. That makes me sad. I loved them. Have a fun day with a blessed 2024 writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/23/2023 12:55:00 AM

Your poem paints a pretty scene indeed, Paula. Snow can be such fun! Have a wonderful weekend. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you like my fun "Red Bird" write. Snow is fun to play in but a mess to clean up/shovel. Have a fun day writing away....................

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 5:16:00 PM

beautiful, Paula. I loved your almost magical story about your 2 winter friends. Nicely done...have a great evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2023 2:33:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Red Bird" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a fun day writing away....................

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2023 10:59:00 AM

You used three very good forms here and each one you have done very well.. good luck in the contest..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2023 1:00:00 PM

Thank You for your note, your kind words and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my "Red Bird" write. Have a fun day writing away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2023 6:39:00 AM

My Pretty Red Bird~Date Written:12/22/2023 ~~~ 3 Poems in 1~ Monoku~Limerick~Haiku