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I'm stealing a few moments from Father Time to pen my thoughts on parchment pages. I write of mirth we shared, sweet and sublime, capturing it in recorded history of us for the ages. As twilight broaches night, I write by candlelight, scrawling thoughts that are roaming in my head... those refusing to remain in my heart. Though frowns have furrowed our brows and etched wrinkles and creases on our faces, we shared many more moments of laughter that made us cry tears in streams of joy rather than those wept in sorrow and sadness, cherished memories of loving embraces. There are things I could never find voice to reveal. Perhaps, it's better that they remained unspoken then. But I feel sure my eyes told you more than any spoken words could have made any clearer. If you could see my eyes as shadows fall, you'd be aware of more than I could bear to read the drop of your shoulders, and the rivulets shining on your cheeks as moonlight begins peeking in the window. In reading this, you have my heart's decree that my love never died, but was magnified year upon year with great depth of emotions. And at its end, you'll find teardrop stains smearing the ink that would never run dry if I continued writing, but my confession is long enough. It's in your possession in this dour darkness without a whisper I could offer in farewell, or one last embrace.

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Date: 5/6/2024 6:55:00 AM
Dearest Lin, Wow, the imagery you've crafted, from stealing moments from Father Time to the flickering candlelight illuminating your thoughts, creates a wonderful picture of longing and introspection. I loved the unspoken emotions and silent communication conveyed through your eyes add a layer of depth and intimacy to the poem, underscoring the power of connection beyond words. A testament to the enduring power of love and the profound impact of shared memories. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/6/2024 7:27:00 AM
Morning and thanks you ever so much for seeing my poetry through my eyes so very often. Your in-depth reviews sometimes explain what my lines are trying to convey better than my words do. I am sincerely grateful that a poet of your talent reads me. hugs, my kind friend.
Date: 5/5/2024 4:51:00 PM
your poem left me breathless, Lin. It was filled with heartfelt remembrance of a relationship initially filled with laughter, joy, and a life sublime of cherished memories. The verse about what your eyes revealed was so touching and beautifully expressed. The last paragraph (you'll find teardrop stains smearing the ink that would never run dry) spoke of the pain and sorrow you felt. I felt as if I was sitting next to you as you penned this poem. So personable, sincere, and real. hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/6/2024 7:22:00 AM
This is something I could've written 12 years ago and never mailed along with several others to him... but all is well now. Sara, I want to thank you for being such a loyal follower as well as for your sincere comments. I appreciate your detailed thoughts. hugs.
Date: 5/5/2024 12:31:00 PM
A heart that longs and dares to move on, not forget, just end with grace. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 5/6/2024 7:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim.

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