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Bob's Life Songs: The Mindless Drone

(Image courtesy of bobslifesongs.blogspot.com)

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They gathered outside my house, People, walking around, brainwashed zombies, Mindless drones, programmed by societal norms, Floating through life with vacant stares, Lost in a sea of monotony and conformity. Their faces, dull and expressionless, Eyes glazed over, completely voided of life's fire Caught in the grips of routine and repetition, Their souls slowly withering away. Each day, the same as the last, A never-ending cycle of mediocrity, Bound by the shackles of mundane existence, Dreams and aspirations left to gather dust. They go about their lives, like automatons, Mindlessly following societal expectations, Dulled to the beauty of the world around them, Blind to the possibilities that lie in wait. Solitude has become their constant companion, Yet they cling to it like a security blanket, Unaware of the possibilities of human connection, Content in their self-imposed isolation. They seek solace in distractions, Screens and gadgets replacing human interaction, Living in a virtual world of superficiality, Where true connection is merely an illusion. They scuttle along, like ants in a line, Striving for success in a world that values material gain, Chasing after empty promises and false desires, Never stopping to question the worth of their endeavors. But amidst the darkness that surrounds them, A flicker of hope still lingers, For within each vacant stare lies a dormant spark, Waiting to be awakened and set free. Let us not succumb to this mindless trance, Break free from the chains of society's expectations, Embrace the beauty and chaos of life, Be the ones who refuse to become a brain washed zombie.

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Date: 5/4/2024 6:19:00 AM
A chilling poem, arresting observations and quite frightening imagery....this is really thought provoking writing Sara, an excellent read.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/4/2024 5:45:00 PM
thank you for the words of strength and encouragement you offer. Appreciate your visit. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 4:16:00 PM
Hey, Sara, where did you come up with those pictures of my neighbors on my block?! lol. (Actually, my neighbors are anything but Zombies...). Cheers, gw
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:22:00 PM
Ha! Our neighbors, too, are anything but zombies...especially during the summer--a bit rowdy during the weekends in their backyards. GRRR!
Date: 5/3/2024 1:07:00 PM
Your poem offers a poignant critique of societal conformity and the numbing effects of routine and modern distractions. It paints a vivid picture of a world where people, likened to "brainwashed zombies" and "mindless drones," move through life with a sense of emptiness and resignation.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:23:00 PM
I appreciate your visit and analysis of my poem, Silent One. Your comments were spot on. At least poets are not zombies...grateful we're not :-) have a great evening, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 10:05:00 AM
A nice poem evoking us to seek our own self, instead of being dictated by AI and social media.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:23:00 PM
thanks for your visit and insightful comments, Jay. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 8:03:00 AM
Millennial fatigue hits all of us. I like this expose". Get a Life has never been more applicable.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:24:00 PM
I love that expression 'get a life.' So true...get your own life. :-) thanks for your visit, Hilda, and for your comments. Have a wonderful weekend, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 7:18:00 AM
A stunning poem about how in today's fast-paced, distracted, and materialistic society, people are losing their unique identities and the ability to connect, dear Sara. By highlighting the significance of liberating oneself from social conventions and reigniting the flame of uniqueness and human connection, your poetry condemns the robotic actions of those mired in a vicious cycle of boredom and solitude.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:26:00 PM
I agree with you, Sotto. People are losing their ability to connect and create relationships...don't know whether to be alarmed, sad, or both. I find convention, boredom, solitude, and mediocrity disconcerting and even distasteful. Thanks for your insightful read and comments. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 6:36:00 AM
Says much and with the picture accompaniment. We have a smorgasbord of life laid out before us. I pray that the youth don’t just look into the meaningless box in their hand. It has the power to deceive. They need to come out of their trance and see the beauty around them, embrace rleationships.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:30:00 PM
I share your concerns and prayers, Kim. That meaningless box can be highly misused to propagandize today's youth who (in my mind) become more and more robotic and subject to deception every day. Enough said. Thanks for stopping by; hugs & blessings for your weekend, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 6:01:00 AM
Reality’s nightmare surrounding us! Oh nooooo! Already we, life you here, must present the better alternatives. Before the infusion everywhere of AI! Superb penning! A rich read! xoxo, Sara!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:29:00 PM
I agree with your sentiment, Sally. AI is positive but I question if anyone's thought about the long-term downside of it...reminds me of the Huxley's book BRAVE NEW WORLD. Anyway, appreciate your visit and your comments. Have a splendid evening....good to see you :-) hugs, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 5:27:00 AM
Ouch! Quite the poetic indictment Sarah. I'll bet Bill got a chuckle out of this one. The message is clear, be a unique individual. However, I would argue that the right kind of conformity is a good thing. But I get what you're saying, is, don't allow the media to dictate your life, nor necessarily follow the crowd. Thought provoking poem
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:27:00 PM
I agree, Tom. Some conformity (like obeying laws) keeps us civilized and keeps chaos at bay. Thanks for your remarks. Glad you found my poem thought provoking. Appreciate your visit today, Tom. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

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