LOVE STORY

A walk on clouds above the rain By her side, there is no pain There is no past, only today Every second is holiday On bed of roses we douse in wine Oh! Her love, so dear divine It's like a heaven, full of bliss Like the damp of her sweet kiss Her sweet smile makes me forget My greatest worries and regrets The grace of her charm makes me calm Like none around me could do me harm And by the light of moon in silver We pray that fate will bind us forever I put her hand above my heart And swear we'll never be apart Love Story Poetry Contest 1st place

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/9/2024 11:34:00 PM

Dear poet, its been a while since ive last read your work. And i must say, as always your poem flows with such sincere emotions. I really love the opening line especially of each stanza! So descriptive and unique! “ A walk on clouds above the rain“ “ On bed of roses we douse in wine “ “ And by the light of moon in silver “ just beautiful! Along with your very creative rhymes! So well delivered and well woven! Congratulations on your win too! Always a Pleasure reading your work

R. B. Cawis
Date: 5/10/2024 3:26:00 AM

Thank you very much dear poet... And also for the effort in making kind comments... I like you very much...

Karen Jones

Date: 4/29/2024 9:31:00 PM

What a sweet romantic poem! Enjoyed

R. B. Cawis
Date: 4/30/2024 4:52:00 PM

Thank you very much... Product of creative mind but partially inspired by actual events... I placed it in present tense so one can feel the emotion like it currently happens...