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Poetic Form: Sonnet
Inspired: 2024 May 02

 

*2nd Place*
Sonnet - Untraditional
Contest Judged: 2024 May 11
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

Video: Oliver by YT

"One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life. The word is love. Sophocles, Greek Poet ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Tanked temps pools inky smears ere striking lights, nightstand shelved as bed post warming invites, facade postpones ceiling beams gold strike streaks, soleless soul flits swarming countenance cheeks, dance preps off-Broadway show and a bit more, mirror laughs hushed, smiles aloud, assured score. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Hogwarts seedbed on windows, one attends, self-mocked reflect face, sees the village ends, pressed off, Hogwarts seedbed--windows, returns, swings, tick, chime, digital, sands, time-take-turns, midday passes, pinks-whites-brown creamy melts, boredom still on, chips and pops up, rain pelts. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Ain't an, Acro..., Aero..., Aquaphobic, Where is love? Heal this ... Agoraphobic.

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Date: 5/12/2024 3:03:00 PM
Hilo, wonderful writing, very creative and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the video too, Constance
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2024 3:51:00 PM
Thanks for its mention and Happy Mother's Day, Constance. Aloha, William
Date: 5/12/2024 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/12/2024 10:28:00 AM
My thanks, Sara, for your considerations. Have a Happy Mothers Day, Aloha, William
Date: 5/12/2024 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Yes, "Where is love?" Many ask this questions. Enjoy your day with your wonderful win.............
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/12/2024 10:27:00 AM
I am pleased by your thought-filled sentiments, Paula, jave a Happy Mother's Day, Aloha, William
Date: 5/2/2024 4:06:00 PM
a unique but creative write, dear William. You have a truly unique poetic mind. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 5/2/2024 4:14:00 PM
Wow, you're a quick one, Sara. I'm unsure if you've seen the last details/window dressing--thanks, as always. Aloha, William

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