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Lonely Bench

I remember the day When I walked away Not even saying goodbye Just leaving you with a lie When our kiss was French And we were at that bench Sitting under that tree It happened so magically But my heart started racing because of the heat Unfortunately so did me feet Now it feels like my heart was hit by a wrench As I sit here thinking of you, on this lonely bench

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2013 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on another win!! Nice to see this one.
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/28/2013 10:16:00 PM
This is nice Julie,,,goodnight~Linda
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/28/2013 3:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Julie xx
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/27/2013 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on your intriguing poem and win...Donna
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/27/2013 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
Date: 3/23/2013 10:06:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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Julie Alcin
Date: 3/30/2013 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words

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