Life

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Life is an amalgamation of chemicals and elements Independently functioning to attain and maintain the whole. From stardust and chaos, cells fashioned themselves into existence, Evolving, propagating, and achieving higher consciousness.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/22/2024 8:25:00 PM

Congratulations, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2024 6:14:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/21/2024 1:25:00 PM

Empirical beauty of science in your words Emile. Congratulations my friend! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/22/2024 8:12:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Matt Caliri

Date: 5/20/2024 9:00:00 PM

Congrats on 7th place in my contest out of 61 entries! Loved your scientific approach to this, exploring the beauty of the invisible (to the naked eye) world! Well done! Each line had great depth, like a slice of cheesecake.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2024 6:42:00 AM

Thanks, Matt. I welcome and appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend; Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/5/2024 9:32:00 AM

Dear Emile, your wonderful pen captures this amazing process of life arising from stardust and chaos so beautifully in your acrostic poem. Indeed, we are all made of stardust.. simple astounding! Your poetic talent and intellect sparkles in this piece. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2024 12:18:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. I welcome and appreciate your comments. You have brought a smile to my day, my friend; Emile.