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Last Thoughts of a Dying Warrior

His mind lay prey to mumbled threats within, drawn to perch upon a twig-thin edge slung between a gauze of blatant dreams. Like some homeless bird come to make a nest, it yanked discarded bits of skin and hair, from bins of vain memory's hoard, then joined to form a place where a brain might rest and preen. Once settled, he drank Not from the stilled rummaging but the distilled rum in his hand and sang discordant notes that clanged above the cough of fractured words. “The mind is myth. And so am I."

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Date: 4/10/2023 9:21:00 AM
intriguing entertainment and well executed, enjoyed this very much
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Date: 4/5/2023 9:10:00 AM
A wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day...................
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John Ozemko
Date: 4/5/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thanks for reading and for your kind comment
Date: 4/5/2023 12:59:00 AM
Or 'never minding the mist' until it's too late, bespeaking a cowardice. ~ "The world breaks everyone but some find strength in the broken places" - Ernest Hemingway
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John Ozemko
Date: 4/5/2023 3:50:00 AM
Always happy to be read and receive comments.
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John Ozemko
Date: 4/5/2023 3:48:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 4/4/2023 10:57:00 AM
There's symphony in the vibrant words of the valiant... chords beneath its wings. Great poem you wrote here Sir John! Thanks to poetrysoup for its email today... reading a poem of yours again! Cliff
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John Ozemko
Date: 4/5/2023 3:51:00 AM
Thanks for reading and your comments

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