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Jinx

Jokes passed around in my car… Sure went very far…left me with a scar… Maybe I’ll be His unique, brilliant star… It’s awesome that I’m a daydreamer thus far… I’m like a prowling lion, waiting for its prey – RAWR! I’m like the lowest of the lowest bar…arrrrr! I’m just as bizarre As a pirate in his ship that’s about to be at war – ARRRRRRRGH! ARR maties! The other pirates laugh – HAR HAR HAR! I’m so crazy, still wondering where you are… You…are…in this heart of stone…a heart that is the color of tar… But, together, we are extra courageous We are like a soccer team – hell, if I knew about the fuss (meaning: if I followed sports, then I’d supposedly be “a normal boy”) We are like wealthy individuals – wow, very luxurious! If only my siblings and I didn’t cuss – we always do…mhm! YUS! I’m feeling uncomfortable in my skin right now If I were comfortable in my shoes – since I’m not – how would I be like? I’m like my dog when I walk him – he goes in opposite directions…somehow… I can never understand anyone in the first place…I drift off into my own mindset and I get awfully upset afterwards – words are words and they are only temporary (they flutter and flutter in my mind like a billion birds)…not to mention the fact that we’re not on the same page…we went our separate ways and I sit here in silent rage…I’m like a bike that runs into a bricked wall – I’m all wrecked-up, but I’m feeling His healing hands on my shoulder, assuring me that everything is fine and dandy…I’m like-like-like… The light and dark side of me: BIZARRE!!! Jinx. XD - this poem is dedicated to the weirdest Gemini side of me...ain't it strange? Please leave a comment below (: Thank you!

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Date: 4/23/2016 7:29:00 AM
Wow David this is one of the best I have read from you ....First off the flow is spot on, love all the little humor you threw in...always be comfortable being you my friend and don't let anyone tell you different. Much enjoyed
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Date: 4/25/2016 3:56:00 AM
Hello Tim! :) Nice to see you on my page. Thank you! I am more comfortable with writing in my own styles these days. Thank you for your advice.. I will consider it for my future projects (my upcoming poems, coming out as soon as possible). Have a delightful day, wherever you are :)
Date: 4/23/2016 2:03:00 AM
Not in the least, to me anyway! I recommend defining specifically that strange, bizarre and weird you. After selecting which definition of those said words and how they define you know. Better how they will define you in the future. This are my thoughts. Peace and many blessings my friend.
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Date: 4/25/2016 3:54:00 AM
Steven, thank you very much for commenting on my poem! :) I appreciate it wholeheartedly. Okay! :) I will make sure to do that as soon as possible. Your thoughts are gold to me. I hope you have a marvelous day!

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