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Written for " incarnate" contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh..

I am the cascading radiance, between apricot glows of gloaming, when mauve mists shift, mirroring sage seas of love, I look beyond silvery skies whilst selfless stars sprinkle, sizzling streaks of sunflower sparkles~ upon wrinkled waves of weariness. It is in divine silence, I see your seraphic silhouette~ incarnate elysian empires, where rivers flow in righteous rhythm, awakening stainless lotus rituals, soaring amidst the ardent ambience of butterfly bliss. Now my heart twirls to riveting themes, captivated by the charismatic credence of your charming finesse~ swirling beneath paper balloons, ornamented with pristine pansies, to weave fuchsia faith with dahlia dreams. Yet, sometimes, I question the eclectic light, lulling my aching soul, would life be a pensive pilgrim without your angelic wings? what if I had never found the sanctified sanctuary, shielded with golden gates adorned in rose-pearl calligraphies, would I then still be drowning, alone, engulfed in fears? For I’ve found scriptures of serenity through carmine carvings on the mystical walls in your poetic palace, there love is the astral language of constellations, guiding poignant peonies to a holistic sphere of artistic healing. So tonight, I’ll unlock cosmic windows to the root chakra, where you are the enlightened king, and your altruistic anthem, rings musically like soothing singing bowls, echoing forgiving heartbeats, and I, will remain faithfully engrossed eternally, like petals blossoming within your gardenia grace.

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Date: 5/17/2024 4:36:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear Ink. It's heartfelt and an honor to share with you the podium.
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Date: 5/16/2024 2:11:00 PM
Magnificent writing, as usual. I'm always floored reading your poems, Inky. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 5/16/2024 11:55:00 PM
This is so kind of you always to understand and place my poems dear Edward. Not many can understand my metaphors but i trust you do. Appreciate your support and placement truly
Date: 5/7/2024 6:04:00 PM
Almost prose mixed with ballad- love your beautiful writing, wish your beautiful soul more and more inspiration- dear ink, <3
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Date: 5/16/2024 11:55:00 PM
Awwn thank you so much sweet paige
Date: 5/7/2024 12:44:00 PM
IE, wonderful creation and a pleasure to read. You give a connection to the universe through beautiful words. There is so much to consider about this world and the descriptions you serve up stimulate that thinking and bring a big smile here!
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Date: 5/16/2024 11:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much truly for your kind and generous support always dear duke
Date: 5/5/2024 10:14:00 PM
So elegant I especially liked how you ended this one with the gardenia grace. So pretty!
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Date: 5/6/2024 2:32:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet andrea. I didnt know this word before the contest . I did know “ reincarnate” but not incarnate. So it was nice learning. Im so glad you liked this
Date: 5/5/2024 4:34:00 PM
Who can write in such beautiful colors, textures and metaphors like our Inky? I know I couldn't. Your style is your own and it's lovely, like your personality. I hope Insta is treating you kindly. Grrrr
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Date: 5/6/2024 2:34:00 AM
Haha insta, i saw you were back there when i got on insta few weeks back. Thank you for still following me. I dont really touch instagram. Perhaps traumatized by all that i went through. However, i have a poem for insta. “ confluence” do have a look when you can. Thank you always for being so kind. I appreciate your name popping up in comments ! Honor
Date: 5/5/2024 12:55:00 PM
Your divinely penned contemplation charms and enamors. Like love itself, your words carry a poignancy expansively displayed and intimately felt. Cheers, Robert
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Date: 5/6/2024 2:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear robert. I am grateful for your kind and generous support truly
Date: 5/5/2024 8:48:00 AM
Magnificent alliterations, splendid imagery and a divine argument. Your poetry reaches great heights. Love reigns throughout. A brilliant poem that deserves a high placing in the contest.
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Date: 5/6/2024 2:36:00 AM
Ah thank you so very much dear victor.im so very grateful for your kind support
Date: 5/5/2024 7:38:00 AM
Love has so much power. When one is overwhelmed by love, life changes mystically and mysteriously. Yet fear plagues the mind as we begin wondering if we will miss that sanctified sanctuary. But soon hope wins over. Once love is affirmed, how beautiful it is to remain faithful engrossed eternally with the loved one's 'gardenia grace'. Each word and image in your poem are so beautifully aligned that a slight change in the order of their placing mars the beauty of the poem. Great Poetess, every time, you leave me awed with your exceptional flair for poetry!
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Date: 5/6/2024 2:45:00 AM
Awwn sweet valsa! Your comments life me up and leave my heart warm with gratitude, honored and humbled by your selfless and sincere compliments. Thank you so very much truly
Date: 5/5/2024 6:28:00 AM
Wonderfully exploring in mystical world--your words resonate in heavenly realms, Ink.---It is in divine silence, I see your seraphic silhouette~ incarnate elysian empires, where rivers flow in righteous rhythm--And splendidly invoking echoes of love in divine diction---For I’ve found scriptures of serenity through carmine carvings on the mystical walls in your poetic palace, there love is the astral language of constellations-- A FAVE!
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:04:00 AM
Thank you so much im truly honored and humbled by your kind compliments and the fave. Always so very grateful for your poetic presence dear vijay.
Date: 5/5/2024 4:36:00 AM
"In divine silence an elysian empire reveals rivers flowing in righteous rhythms" , well penned
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear joseph
Date: 5/4/2024 6:54:00 PM
so beautiful emotion,the images are brilliant, your words touched me poet, thanks
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear poet I appreciate your kindness always
Date: 5/4/2024 5:46:00 PM
Ink, true Empress! A magnum opus…The crown in the Tower. And…whew…. My rewarding hugs. Bravo, dear one
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:08:00 AM
Thank you so much you are so very kind dear sally i appreciate your poetic presence
Date: 5/4/2024 5:23:00 PM
You have such a Beautiful Mind!
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Date: 5/6/2024 3:12:00 AM
Awwn thats so sweet of you to say. Thank you so very much
Date: 5/4/2024 5:01:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful, eloquent, and evocative. The fluidity of your poem made for a refreshing read. I always like your alliterations (poignant peonies,poetic palace.); you are so gifted. I'm always impressed and in awe. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/4/2024 4:44:00 PM
So lovely poem! Well very sweet read indeed! A favorite! Have a wonderful day sweet lovely Ink ~ AA
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Date: 5/4/2024 1:59:00 PM
This is a divine poem that flows with tender rhythm. To my heart is the phrase "I will remain faithfully engrossed eternally". It is beautiful.
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Date: 5/4/2024 1:14:00 PM
Dear Ink, Woe, your initial lines evoke an extraordinary sense of awe and respect for nature as they portray a mesmerizing waterfall of light, encircled by mauve mists and glows of apricot. The vision of altruistic stars scattering sunflower sparkles onto wrinkly waves of exhaustion evokes a sense of rejuvenation and renewal. Lyrically, the poem celebrates the transformative power of love and the profound impact it has on our souls. The way you use diction is incredibly beautiful and eloquent. It feels like observing a celestial ballet, where each verse symbolizes a delicate step. After reading your poem, I have been transported to a world of grace and illumination. It has inspired me to assist others in finding solace and peace.
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Date: 5/4/2024 12:02:00 PM
Dearest Empress, oh how your words are a symphony of celestial beauty of divine imagery that transports my soul to realms of ethereal wonder. I just loved how your word dances with the elegance of a thousand stars, each line a graceful step in the cosmic ballet of existence. As I step through your verses, I found the path to enlightenment and grace, guiding hearts to find peace in the embrace of love and serenity. I also loved how your poetic palace is a sanctuary of profound wisdom, where every word is a beacon of light in the darkness of doubt. Empress you are such a radiant spirit within the world. A Fav x 10, Blessings, Daniel.
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Date: 5/4/2024 10:43:00 AM
Hey Ink Empress, Your poem is a mesmerising journey through the realms of love, beauty, and introspection. The imagery is rich and evocative, painting vivid pictures of celestial landscapes and emotional experiences. The opening lines capture your awe and reverence for the natural world, with cascading radiance amidst apricot glows and mauve mists. The imagery of selfless stars sprinkling sunflower sparkles upon wrinkled waves of weariness creates a sense of rejuvenation and wonder. It is a lyrical ode to love's transformative power and the profound impact of the beloved on the speaker's soul. It invites readers to immerse themselves in its enchanting imagery and reflect on the beauty and complexity of human emotions.
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Date: 5/4/2024 10:38:00 AM
Ooo selfless stars sprinkle, sizzling streaks of sunflower sparkles.. the mesmerizing alliteration papi!!! rivers flow in righteous rhythm, awakening stainless lotus rituals,.. mmm breathtaking movements !!! found scriptures of serenity through carmine carvings on the mystical walls in your poetic palace,. The architecture in these lines are amazing!! found scriptures of serenity through carmine carvings on the mystical walls in your poetic palace, pure artistry.. love flows so beautifully in this piece
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