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Im sorry you see

I'm sorry, You see To my 3 beautiful boys I'm sorry, you see Mum's not quite been the same lately But I promise I'm getting better I owe it to both you and me To my family and friends I'm sorry, you see If I've ignored calls and texts I know it's only because you care for me But some days it's been a struggle just to function and think lately To anyone who relates to this I'm sorry, you see But I hope you understand even the strongest struggle sometimes Be it anyone, even you or me

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David Smith

Date: 6/6/2024 12:17:00 PM

You have my respect, firstly for such a brave write and secondly for the passion that produced a poem that is hopeful and does not dwell on negativity but shows strength and maturity in the writing of it, The poem is well constructed and flows together nicely. Will definitely read more of your work. You have earned a place on poetry soup for as long as you want. Hopefully you now can enjoy the feeling of sunshine on your shoulders most days. Best regards David in NZ (70 years life experience)

Ailsa Wright
Date: 6/9/2024 11:12:00 AM

Wow what wonderful, positive feedback to receive, truly appreciated. Comments such as these is what keeps me writing so i thank you so much. I hope you are well ??

Cat Drinkle

Date: 3/25/2024 6:13:00 PM

Great poem, I feel it, and your heart

Ailsa Wright
Date: 3/27/2024 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, the lovely comments received, like yours, are filling my heart, so thank you x

Tom Woody

Date: 3/19/2024 5:54:00 AM

Depression is not a respecter of persons, it can strike anyone any time. Hey, welcome to PS!

Ailsa Wright
Date: 3/21/2024 5:32:00 PM

You're absolutely right, thanks for welcoming me, hope you are well

Trish Fern

Date: 3/15/2024 6:32:00 PM

Same

Ailsa Wright
Date: 3/17/2024 8:51:00 PM

I do hope your ok sending you strength and hope for better days x

Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/10/2024 1:08:00 PM

Sincere, touching, excellently articulated, relevant and relatable. Congratulations on the win!

Ailsa Wright
Date: 3/10/2024 3:44:00 PM

Wow, Thank you so much for your fantastic feedback, i cant even describe how good it has made me feel, truly appreciated

Ink Empress

Date: 3/10/2024 11:58:00 AM

Dear ailsa, i feel the sincerity of your heartfelt words woven here in such a poignant manner. Life is not always butterflies and rainbows and it definitely isnt easy, and especially somedays like youv said it can be harder and self isolation the only answer, as everything gets overwhelming. I hope and pray for better days. You are stronger than you know.Happy mothers day. Sending you light today and always. Congratulations on your win.

Ailsa Wright
Date: 3/10/2024 3:41:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I hope you are well, kind words like yours are definitely helping and making such a difference, thank you again, truly appreciated

Silent One

Date: 3/10/2024 8:38:00 AM

It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. This is heartbreaking and remind me of what my sister went through.. I am so sorry for what you are going through and I am sure your boys will understand.. I hope you are back to your happy self soon.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Ailsa Wright
Date: 3/10/2024 11:45:00 AM

Wow i am absolutely delighted with my place in the contest. I can not thank you enough for the boost this has given me and also for your kind words. I hope you are well and also your sister too, many thanks again

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/23/2024 5:58:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Ailsa Wright
Date: 2/23/2024 1:51:00 PM

Thank you so much x