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May 16, 2024

Poem of the day on May 18, 2024
If Only You Knew Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Silent One


 

Withered meadows of yesteryears ache, recalling memories forlorn, As discords of then mourn, assailing vibes of now, emotions torn; Yet I believe, love would have still vouched~ together we belong, If only you knew, how to strum, sensuous rhythms of our love-song. Gracing my embrace, lovingly you caress, my jilted sleepless night, And on every dawning horizon, you still are, the halo of my delight; As I believe, episode of love, would always write a lovesome theme, If only you knew, you have long been, epitome of my romantic dream. You bedazzle my memory, beaming grin of an enamored glance, Being my Cinderella, avowing to rekindle fairy-tale of romance; As I believe, you would still be the music, pulses-cadent impart, If only you knew, you are the seductress, plucking strings of my heart. In realms of desires, chasing bliss of your love, my passions call-out, When you are in amorous cuddle, hypnotized by grip of fervent clout; As earnestly I believe, you would love me still, even from miles afar, If only you knew, you have been my aura, my fulgent northern-star. Birds that always sung for you, serenade you, lauding your name, Spurred by fond recollections, applauding memoirs of love’s acclaim; And I believe, words unsaid would not be uttering, a sigh of regret, If only you knew, love we shared, pledges eternal shall never forget.

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Date: 5/23/2024 12:26:00 PM
WOW Vijay you never fail to surprise me with your beautiful poems full of wonderful imaginary!! Belated Congrats on POTD my friend!! Debx
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Date: 5/23/2024 12:58:00 PM
Glad you found it, my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks, Deb.
Date: 5/23/2024 10:27:00 AM
Hello Vijay, i just read this poem. it is so romantic. . My fave. My vfriend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2024 3:21:00 PM
Hello Vijay, you are welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2024 12:57:00 PM
Yes--it is there now. Thank you my friend for taking the time to revisit. Much appreciate your support, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2024 11:58:00 AM
Vaijay it is there now. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2024 11:56:00 AM
Hello Vijay, i will do this soon. I will read your poetry. Yes i will click again on Fave. my friend./ Darlene/
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Date: 5/23/2024 11:24:00 AM
That is so nice to hear from you, my friend. Glad you returned with your FAVE, Darlene. Much appreciate you as always. Your FAVE did not register though--perhaps you want to click on FAVE again.
Date: 5/21/2024 11:45:00 AM
Vijay, your imagery always "bedazzles" me - "applauding memories," "meadows of yesteryears ache," "jilted sleepless night" - as these images truly speak of a longing, romantic heart. So wonderfully written. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings and belated congratulations for your POTD!
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Date: 5/23/2024 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Same--your are always very kind. Much appreciate.
Date: 5/21/2024 7:16:00 AM
To say merely that this poem deserves the title POTD would be an understatement. Vijay, this is a vividly descriptive, heart-wrenching, skillfully-composed masterpiece. Janice
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Date: 5/23/2024 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Janice--glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 5/20/2024 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay, on POTD! Passion calls out in the jilted sleepless night.
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Date: 5/23/2024 11:25:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 5/20/2024 11:10:00 AM
Vijay, congrats on receiving recognition you deserve! You capture the emotion of a missed love very well and it resonates with me. I suspect it does with many of us. I think that we could have a lasting relationship with many different partners, and we hopefully end up with a good one. I think it's normal to think of alternate pathways from time to time. Just a fun exercise really that provides a short distraction. I try not to obsess over it. OMG!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2024 11:26:00 AM
Always a delight when you visit--much appreciate your kind remarks, Duke. Many thanks my friend.
Date: 5/19/2024 12:27:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your New win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write again. Enjoy your day, enjoy your win..................
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Date: 5/23/2024 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate your return visit.
Date: 5/19/2024 10:48:00 AM
Your poem flowed with great rhymes and as always vivid imagery and I see you got POTD also.. so congratulations for that and your placement in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2024 11:27:00 AM
Thank you SO. Much appreciate your kind feedback. And many thanks as well for sponsoring contest.
Date: 5/18/2024 11:37:00 PM
In the desolate meadows of the past, you reminisce about memories with such intense emotions.Even from afar, the love you hold dear, almost a cinderella of fairytale quality, you recall in the realms of your desires. This is a very descriptive, emotional write that is sure to do well in Silent Ones competition. However good luck and congratulations dear Vijay on this Gem being awarded POTD honours...Hugs
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Date: 5/19/2024 6:25:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Maria. So special to read your kind remarks. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 9:32:00 PM
This is a stirring masterpiece poem, Vijay! So many hauntingly beautiful lines. This is a fave. Congratulations on POTD. :)
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Date: 5/19/2024 6:24:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your kind words. Much appreciate your feedback and your FAVE, Evelyn.
Date: 5/18/2024 4:17:00 PM
Hello Vijay, What a stunning piece, and your POTD recognition is well-deserved. Your poem's evocative words and raw emotion is capturing the essence of longing and love's endurance. Reading it, I felt a profound connection to the themes of memory and unspoken devotion. Your talent for creating such heartfelt narratives is truly inspiring. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work and inviting us into your poetic world. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 5:16:00 PM
So very kind of you, Daniel. You always take the time to write thoughtful feedback, my friend. I appreciate and value your opinion. Many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem. You just may be the Khalil Gibran of our day. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/18/2024 5:14:00 PM
I am humbled by your kind feedback, Benjamin. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 12:35:00 PM
Dear Vijay, You have mastered the art of love poems. They always so emotive, sincere, and straight from the heart. Congratulations dear poet. I now must fav this one!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 5:13:00 PM
Dear Nancy, I am honored by your kind remarks and your FAVE. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 11:55:00 AM
' And on every dawning horizon, you still are, the halo of my delight. ' So dreamy and romantic. A ' halo ' reminds me of a circle- a connection unbroken. Unconditional love, indeed. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 12:22:00 PM
Much appreciate you being here, my friend. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks for your kind remarks, Brandy. Hugs to you as well.
Date: 5/18/2024 11:25:00 AM
Nice entry for the contest, Vijay. Congratulations on your fine POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 12:20:00 PM
Haven't seen your poems in a while, Bill. Much appreciate your visit and comments, my friend. Many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 10:24:00 AM
Vijay, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 12:19:00 PM
Glad to see you again, Tania. Much appreciate--many thanks for your feedback.
Date: 5/18/2024 8:49:00 AM
A contest still to win me thinks, but Congratulations on this magnificent poem being chosen and honored as POTD Vijay, how deserved this accolade was. Hugs and blessings - Jennifer. Such a superb write!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer-much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, my friend.
Date: 5/18/2024 8:16:00 AM
Ah, I just sprouted flowers out of my heart, and all because of this poem lol, your amazing Vij, a fav congrats too on POTD
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 9:53:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, Vienna. Many thanks, my friend.
Date: 5/18/2024 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. A great poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate.
Date: 5/18/2024 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a beautiful write. Enjoy your day with this wonderful win.............
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Date: 5/18/2024 6:43:00 AM
"Yet I believe, love would have still vouched~ together we belong," -- after all is said and done, love is the only truth we know. "As I believe, you would still be the music, pulses-cadent impart, If only you knew, you are the seductress, plucking strings of my heart." Very beautiful, Vijay. "If only you knew, love we shared, pledges eternal shall never forget." People change, but true love is eternal, never leaving our ever quaking, conscious hearts. Excellent read!
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Date: 5/18/2024 9:50:00 AM
I am glad you found the poem worthy, my friend. Always a delight when you stop by. Much appreciate your detailed insights, Joe. Many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Vijay, on POTD for another stunning poem with amazing images and perfectly-crafted rhyming form. Utterly romantic with lines like "you are the seductress, plucking strings of my heart." Best wishes ~ Mala
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 6:17:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem, Mala. Always nice to see you on my page. Much appreciate your kind feedback--many thanks.
Date: 5/18/2024 5:57:00 AM
Hey Veej in the spotlight again. Wow four posts in a row with this theme. Yours is a goody, with lines like, "If only you knew, you have long been the epitome of my romantic dream. What gal wouldn't melt?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Much appreciate your encouragement and kind words.
Date: 5/18/2024 5:54:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on POTD
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 6:15:00 AM
Thank you for your return visit Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 5/18/2024 5:46:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your POTD honors ! Your Heartfelt, romantic portrait of love lost is deeply emotional stirring! Enjoy your day!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2024 6:14:00 AM
So nice to hear that from you my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.
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