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if i stood on the ledge of darkness aglow in the light of moonbeams flickering like a lost star beneath clouds of life's doubt would you step out of shadows and let yourself be known my soul has searched the deepest caverns scoured hills and valleys below looking for yours but only finds you masked in dreams still unknown as a mystery that may never be i've walked the shores of eastern seas counted the grains of timeless sand as days until we meet then felt the lash of storms push me back into the starkness of reality as salted sprays kissed my lips instead of yours yet i still yearned to feel your breath arousing me in the winds that wrapped me in a blanket of thoughts i still imagine the feel of your touch against bare flesh as each day closes against the darkness in endless dreams time is moving more quickly these days as the years are fading of hope yet still i await the spark of your soul to light mine in the flames of passion if ever we were to meet then arise like dawn against horizons in an endless glow

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Date: 4/14/2020 11:37:00 PM
So beautiful, Sandra - such lovely poetic expressions. I missed this POTD but understand why it was selected. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/30/2020 5:43:00 AM
Somehow I missed this one! It is beautiful in every way! Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 1/18/2020 8:17:00 AM
Amazing poetry. But waiting sometimes pays off. I found my soulmate after a long time of loneliness. Thank you for sharing, Kai
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. So beautiful. Have a wonderful day writing....
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Date: 1/10/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula ...have a great day yourself
Date: 1/10/2020 10:58:00 AM
Here's to finding and igniting that spark, Sandra! Congrats on a great write for POTD. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 1/10/2020 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Gershon.... :) hugs
Date: 1/9/2020 9:58:00 AM
Sandy please forgive me, your poetry is always outstanding, and i do read almost all your writes. How I missed this wonderful honor bestowed on you I don't know! Congratulations and may your year be blessed. Jennifer.
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Date: 1/9/2020 6:56:00 PM
No forgiveness needed my friend...we all have lives to live and sometimes can't do everything we wish to do as time does not allow... thank you for reading it now my friend and for the congratulations... hugs :)
Date: 1/6/2020 8:45:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 1/6/2020 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim :) hugs
Date: 1/6/2020 7:48:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Really special. Congratulations! I love the interaction with the reader through your poignant questions.
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Date: 1/6/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam... this was one of those writes that my muse kept haunting me with that day until i gave in and wrote it... hugs
Date: 1/6/2020 7:09:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/6/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve... :) hugs
Date: 1/6/2020 8:24:00 AM
Sandy congratulations on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/6/2020 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda... :)
Date: 1/6/2020 7:45:00 AM
Deep desire flows through this masterpiece of a poem, the ache of longing seems to hover above every word as the emotions leave me breathless. Wow and POTD at the same time... Congrats my friend, such a deserved reward for such magical ink.
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Date: 1/6/2020 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris...i awoke to it as potd yesterday and today as a first place winner in a contest...my muse begged to write this one...i am glad i listened to her... hugs :)
Date: 1/6/2020 6:48:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win in Brian's contest. I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece a second time. Hugs, John
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Date: 1/6/2020 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much John... hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 8:53:00 PM
Such magnificence in this timeless write of yearning...wanting...needing but never achieving... never finding that ...one true love, this is a classic write Sandy, one for the ages, congrats on a worthy POTD!
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Date: 1/5/2020 9:16:00 PM
Thank you so much John....:) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 6:17:00 PM
many congrats on POTD Sandra!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2020 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan... hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 6:08:00 PM
This is filled with so many emotions. That tender ache lingers within. You always write so beautifully and from the heart. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/5/2020 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so very much Brandy...my muse is good at pulling out emotions...your kind words brought a smile tonight :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 6:03:00 PM
Very nicely penned Sandra, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/5/2020 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 4:11:00 PM
WoW! Sandra, I felt such “longing” in each and every word. Your content and imagery was on point. I found it to be romantic as well. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. Have a great day. This is going straight into my favs:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/5/2020 5:44:00 PM
wow... thank you so much Alexis...i am honored that this one made it into your favorites... have a wonderful evening... hugs :)
Date: 1/5/2020 2:14:00 PM
what an excellent choice for POTD.... Congrats.
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Date: 1/5/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend.... coming from you that's a high compliment :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 1:23:00 PM
- Dear Sandra, congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/5/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise... i hope you have a beautiful sunday... hugs :)
Date: 1/5/2020 12:08:00 PM
Hello Sandra this is a lovely poem you created. Filled with love for someone. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene... enjoy your day as well... hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 12:03:00 PM
congratulations on POTD
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve.... hugs :)
Date: 1/5/2020 11:34:00 AM
Sandra, so beautifully penned with heartbreaking emotion that just dripped from your words, well done and congratulations on POTD with this write !
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much Constance...my muse begged to write this...glad i listened :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 11:23:00 AM
A deep rendering of the soul and the closed wings it needs to open so it can soar on the warm winds of a beautiful love...a really nice poem Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Frederic for such a wonderful comment :) hugs
Date: 1/5/2020 11:23:00 AM
I am so pleased to see this Fave of mine being honored with POTD Sandra. Big Congratulations my friend! It is very deserving of the honor, xxoo ; )
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...your comments are always so touching :) Have a wonderful sunday... hugs and blessings! XoXo
Date: 1/5/2020 9:01:00 AM
Your 'blanket of thoughts' calls out to another lonely heart. There is such a yearning in this write; one that aches with need for much more than love. Well written and as potd, surely to garner more attention.
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Lin...one of those out of no where haunting writes from my muse... hugs :)
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