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I Would Rather Fall

Love generously grants with ease Thrill of a stolen kiss, But doesn't come with guarantee Of lasting joyful bliss. Love tests with ambiguous quirks - From playful to insane. If we stay to endure, it works, Reward outweighs the pain. Take it or leave it, up to you - I'd rather take the fall. To feel the fervour flaring through - Is worth risking it all. So followed I quests from above, Thrilled by a stolen kiss. The one that led to you, my love, Warrants our lasting bliss. March 5, 2023

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:04:00 PM

Margarita, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/8/2023 8:59:00 AM

Love contrived, but not survived. Was never known before we tried. To speak much more would taint amore. So kiss em' all on your way out the door.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2023 8:03:00 AM

- He who dares nothing, wins nothing Margarita :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/5/2023 7:30:00 AM

You make a very good argument, Maggie. Rarely does love come without strings. Nobody wants to be a marionette. However, I might steal a quick smooch just for a taste. One never knows:)

Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/5/2023 7:55:00 AM

One never knows! It takes two, no matter how. If together, it must be love if apart, it’s a fantasy. The latter may last forever:)