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I Recall

I recall the moment, All at once i realized that no matter what The sun will still rise The breeze will blow The birds will fly about I found a certain reasurrance in this that hit me at my core And all the parts that held me in fell away, Came crashing to the ground with a theatrical wail One that screamed "I'll never be the same again" And then it was over. Crowd trickled out, along with the shoulders to cry on. They all turned away. And the last one standing then was me. Alone. Free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/2/2014 7:40:00 AM
acceptance can be healing Joanna make sure your mum gives the pearls a drink great poem hugs
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:02:00 AM
Joanna, Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/7/2013 11:47:00 AM
Hi Joanna :) CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoyed your win............... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:40:00 PM
Joanna, nicely done.... congrats in Frank's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading nicely done and congrats on ur win
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Date: 11/5/2013 9:02:00 AM
I note you have not posted anything recently which is a shame Joanna you talent in your work keep writing Shadow x smile Ty 2 for visiting my work
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Date: 11/4/2013 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Frank, Joanna
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:35:00 PM
Very pleasant reading. I felt your silent solitude and I was alone, with you, in your freedom..... Congratulations on your placement.... Jake
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:35:00 PM
Very pleasant reading. I felt your silent solitude and it was alone, with you, in your freedom..... Congratulations on your placement.... Jake
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Date: 11/4/2013 1:35:00 PM
An epiphany! Nice poem... Terry (& thank you for your kind comments)
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Date: 11/4/2013 11:39:00 AM
Very dramatic work..Enjoyed reading this one today..I have noticed your lines this day..Sara
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Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 12:09:00 PM
Thankyou very much. This is the first piece I have written in a very long time. Trying to improve my writting.

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