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Written on May 19, 2024

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I came upon a silent soul, Both bright and beautiful, Risking my heart’s hope, Trembling truths spun… Out of control, wonder’s walking, Lessons inspired, insights in life, Heaven’s hearts, gaze through grace, Alive as the starlit skies… I came upon the brilliant blessing, One heart, one soul, expressions, Soft and soothing, soundless, Destiny driven by the muse… Echoes of yesterday’s prayers, praises, Coloring my dreams in destined delights, Feelings flavored by heaven’s healing, On the surface, a precious prize… I came upon the passionate promises, Pouring out of those poetic gestures, Rising from the ashes of life’s lessons, Words warm and welcome, blessings… Dreams destined to cure me of my hurt, Teasing tendrils of joy so gentle, Feeding me with light’s lessons, Hope, faith and love, abiding treasures… I came upon a gift only God could have given, It was sweet, sensitive, sentimental, A heart and a soul who was contented, To be the light of my world and feelings… Love this alive can never be defined, It is the dew on the vine, the mist on the river, The hope and the healing, heaven’s whisper, Sensing what it means to love completely…. With a love that is… Completely giving Completely willing, Capable of completing… The forever in a feeling!

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Date: 5/25/2024 6:06:00 AM
Gina I had no idea this was yours, but not surprised. You are one of the premier poets here, and I loved this feel good, breezy write. Thanks for support and congrats
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Date: 5/19/2024 9:41:00 AM
So beautiful, Gina. I love the pattern of each stanza and the cool ending you gave it.
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Date: 5/19/2024 5:14:00 AM
exquisite words and outstanding alliterative phrases made this poem a beauty and a delight to read. You've truly captured the joy of God's love, that forever feeling. How uplifting your words were for me this Sunday morning. Grateful for you and your willingness to share. Have a blessed Sunday, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/19/2024 3:33:00 AM
So romantic and beautiful and wonderful use of light alliteration, I believe this is what he wants for his contest.. Best of luck my poetic friend..
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