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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ tranquility is white it tastes like a medley of fresh fruit it sounds like wind blowing through trees it smells like ocean mist it looks like a pool of still water it feels like you’re floating on air

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Date: 5/3/2024 8:02:00 AM
Wonderful poetry about the soothing effects of calmness, dear Sara. You articulated the primary point, which is to describe the sensory experiences linked to calm, quite well.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:31:00 PM
thanks for your kind words, dear Sotto. Always grateful for your visits. Wishing you a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 5/3/2024 4:53:00 AM
A marvelous free verse that fills all my senses with tranquility and happiness.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:57:00 AM
many thanks, Jerry! Glad you enjoyed my free verse. Appreciate you and your visits. Enjoy your upcoming weekend, Sara
Date: 5/2/2024 6:28:00 PM
Very nice an original!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/3/2024 4:56:00 AM
awww, many thanks, Karen! Enjoy your upcoming weekend, Sara

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